for and it's gone1/3/2011 c15 little.artist
All these poems were so real. Hope you get more inspiration to write more :)
All these poems were so real. Hope you get more inspiration to write more :)
7/22/2007 c15 
81Sweet Lunacy
Very very well written...I wanted to wait until I'd finished to review..I simply could not stop reading it..Amazing...
81Sweet LunacyVery very well written...I wanted to wait until I'd finished to review..I simply could not stop reading it..Amazing...
8/10/2006 c1 29dirty windows
These are so whimsical, and remind me of pale, pastel shades of darkness. My favourite ones are "Sunshine is colourless, it tastes of yellow" and "baby blue eyes and a soul as black as morning".
The last one has such a nice contrast. And the first, well I don't really know why I love it so much. It's just so beautiful and abstract.
29dirty windowsThese are so whimsical, and remind me of pale, pastel shades of darkness. My favourite ones are "Sunshine is colourless, it tastes of yellow" and "baby blue eyes and a soul as black as morning".
The last one has such a nice contrast. And the first, well I don't really know why I love it so much. It's just so beautiful and abstract.
4/18/2006 c15 1rrmehta364
Wait, how did it take the warmth and leave the light. See, warmth is but a product of light.
Interesting.
1rrmehta364Wait, how did it take the warmth and leave the light. See, warmth is but a product of light.
Interesting.
4/18/2006 c14 rrmehta364
Well, this is another one I don't get. How does elusiveness make you poetic anyways?
Well, this is another one I don't get. How does elusiveness make you poetic anyways?
4/18/2006 c13 rrmehta364
Yep, always make sure not to drop a silence. See, silences can be very fragile.
Yep, always make sure not to drop a silence. See, silences can be very fragile.
4/18/2006 c11 rrmehta364
Sorry, but I didn't understand it.
But please, don't kill yourself. Twould sadden me greatly.
Sorry, but I didn't understand it.
But please, don't kill yourself. Twould sadden me greatly.
4/18/2006 c10 rrmehta364
I must say Autumn is my favorite season. Tis a very pretty time of the year.
I must say Autumn is my favorite season. Tis a very pretty time of the year.
4/18/2006 c8 rrmehta364
"Sunshine is colourless" that bit of the poem is very, very true.
However, the second bit is an insult to the far more significant colors in sunlight.
"Sunshine is colourless" that bit of the poem is very, very true.
However, the second bit is an insult to the far more significant colors in sunlight.
4/18/2006 c4 rrmehta364
Yes, it is strange how the things that are supposed to send us flying only hold us back in the end.
Great poem/thingy.
-peace out.
Yes, it is strange how the things that are supposed to send us flying only hold us back in the end.
Great poem/thingy.
-peace out.
4/16/2006 c15 10Finger Dingbat
great job, once again, but everythings so short, the different poems kinda run into each other,but i know moments are hard to pin down and expresses, and your doing a wonderful job, keep on with everything, and update soon -X
10Finger Dingbatgreat job, once again, but everythings so short, the different poems kinda run into each other,but i know moments are hard to pin down and expresses, and your doing a wonderful job, keep on with everything, and update soon -X