
12/2/2005 c1
39SliversofSilverPain
you say mine are morbid! this is so sad! well done, but so very sad. like the story used, and the despcription of the girl before the memory

you say mine are morbid! this is so sad! well done, but so very sad. like the story used, and the despcription of the girl before the memory
12/2/2005 c1
1Black Planet
ya ya.. good as all of them are.. i would review everyone elses stuff but dani has like 100 things.. maggie about the same on 5 different accounts and probably the same for natalie and aaron.. so excuse me for reviewing alyssa's.. anywho.. it's good and i do like the 3rd on too.. ok ciao!

ya ya.. good as all of them are.. i would review everyone elses stuff but dani has like 100 things.. maggie about the same on 5 different accounts and probably the same for natalie and aaron.. so excuse me for reviewing alyssa's.. anywho.. it's good and i do like the 3rd on too.. ok ciao!
11/28/2005 c1 sealednectar
Woah. It flowed really well and was well written. I preferred the third one, solely for the fact that it sounded the best. Keep writing.
Woah. It flowed really well and was well written. I preferred the third one, solely for the fact that it sounded the best. Keep writing.