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for She never was and never will be

12/2/2005 c1 39SliversofSilverPain
mine are morbid? *cough* reflected in blood? hmm? yes. still cool! well done; this is unceasingly good!
12/2/2005 c1 1Black Planet
another review from me.. hee hee.. a shorter one this time.. i liked this on alot... it flows as easily as one of the evanescence songs.. maybe because of the first line She never was and never will be from everybody's fool.. hmm.. don't know! keep up the good work lyss!
11/28/2005 c1 16amethystdawn
Very angsty. QUite scary really.

The first part's really sad. Like I just want to approach the poor girl and hug her & rock her til the world's finally okay. On the other hand, the later part of the poem became quite frightenign. It's full of wrath and self-hatred.

Over-all, it's a great poem. The rhyming verses are superb.

Keep writing and God bless!

-dawn

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