
3/19/2007 c1
53Katie Nicole
It's humble and pretty. Brings me back to days when I was on better terms with Big Guns Upstairs - but I'll bet I'm not the first to say that (:

It's humble and pretty. Brings me back to days when I was on better terms with Big Guns Upstairs - but I'll bet I'm not the first to say that (:
2/28/2006 c1 The NightFire
I like this, really good. I like the rymeing (i spelt that wrong didn't I?) Yeah, it was really great
I like this, really good. I like the rymeing (i spelt that wrong didn't I?) Yeah, it was really great
1/30/2006 c1
70Aryanda
Astounding. The rhyming was good; the descriptions were great! and I could understand the feeling, which brought it close to home. Great job.

Astounding. The rhyming was good; the descriptions were great! and I could understand the feeling, which brought it close to home. Great job.
11/28/2005 c1
8CraigAPrice
very good poem... reminds of of good times.. now they are all but lost to me now.

very good poem... reminds of of good times.. now they are all but lost to me now.