for Sentenced4/17/2007 c12 DJ
Alex: Wow...hell is a real jerk...
DJ: yeah...PPMS.
Alex: PPMS?
DJ: Perminant PMS.
sorry i have not updated and such. i`ll be losing internet soon so my stories are now dead...unless you would like to finish them?
Alex: Wow...hell is a real jerk...
DJ: yeah...PPMS.
Alex: PPMS?
DJ: Perminant PMS.
sorry i have not updated and such. i`ll be losing internet soon so my stories are now dead...unless you would like to finish them?
12/26/2006 c11 DJ
O...BS has a crush huh? but really, is now the time for that i mean in the path of death, trying to train two witches, and you`re falling in love with one? and what are you cursed with?
Alex: erectile disfunction.
*snickers* that was mean...
Eric: Bad breath...
BS: STOP IT!
DJ: bad initials.
BS: BITCHES! *pck pck pck pck*
O...BS has a crush huh? but really, is now the time for that i mean in the path of death, trying to train two witches, and you`re falling in love with one? and what are you cursed with?
Alex: erectile disfunction.
*snickers* that was mean...
Eric: Bad breath...
BS: STOP IT!
DJ: bad initials.
BS: BITCHES! *pck pck pck pck*
5/17/2006 c10 
18Pixie-Twix
Angel: *to B* look,i get pissed and people find their internal orgins rearranged, not only that but i am finding a whole new kinship with Dru so LEAVE HER ALONE!
Dru: kinship? with me?
Angel: yeah, both of us have nearly been frozen to death by our phycho authors.
loved it girl! can`t wait to read more.
18Pixie-TwixAngel: *to B* look,i get pissed and people find their internal orgins rearranged, not only that but i am finding a whole new kinship with Dru so LEAVE HER ALONE!
Dru: kinship? with me?
Angel: yeah, both of us have nearly been frozen to death by our phycho authors.
loved it girl! can`t wait to read more.
1/17/2006 c9 DJ
*pouts* well FINE! i talked to yuo too so no more reviews! *insert rasberry* okay...just kidding...
*pouts* well FINE! i talked to yuo too so no more reviews! *insert rasberry* okay...just kidding...
1/3/2006 c8 DJ
sorry i haven`t updated, but i have had A, a seriouse case of writters block, and B - i work at a retail store. it is around the holidays. you do the math.
so...loved the sotry and can`t wait to see what happens next.
sorry i haven`t updated, but i have had A, a seriouse case of writters block, and B - i work at a retail store. it is around the holidays. you do the math.
so...loved the sotry and can`t wait to see what happens next.
1/2/2006 c8 7Maeve Summers
Hiya! Another really awesome chapter. But I noticed that the first sentence was a major run-on sentence. Maybe if you put in a comma or something, then that would not make the sentence a run-on. It's just hard to fully understand a run-on sentence until after you have read it. :) Hope my tips helped. And again, an amazing chapter! I can't wait for the next one! Hurry! :) - Amy
7Maeve SummersHiya! Another really awesome chapter. But I noticed that the first sentence was a major run-on sentence. Maybe if you put in a comma or something, then that would not make the sentence a run-on. It's just hard to fully understand a run-on sentence until after you have read it. :) Hope my tips helped. And again, an amazing chapter! I can't wait for the next one! Hurry! :) - Amy
1/2/2006 c7 Maeve Summers
Hiya again, Just another quick tip: If you put " 's", it is either showing possession or the "s" is just a shortened way to say "is". For example, "its" shows possession. "It's" is literally saying "it is". :) Another awesome chapter! :) - Amy
Hiya again, Just another quick tip: If you put " 's", it is either showing possession or the "s" is just a shortened way to say "is". For example, "its" shows possession. "It's" is literally saying "it is". :) Another awesome chapter! :) - Amy
1/2/2006 c6 Maeve Summers
Hiya, Tip #3) Your tenses confuse me a little. Stick to one tense. Sometimes you use past and other times you use present. But a lot of writers have that problem. Ahem, I do! But I try to correct it when I can. :) Awesome chapter! - Amy
Hiya, Tip #3) Your tenses confuse me a little. Stick to one tense. Sometimes you use past and other times you use present. But a lot of writers have that problem. Ahem, I do! But I try to correct it when I can. :) Awesome chapter! - Amy
1/2/2006 c5 Maeve Summers
Hiya, Tip #2) If you want to use "a" before a word such as: a lamp. You would use "a" not "an". Because lamp begins with a consonant. If you wanted to say: an elephant. You would then use "an" because elephant begins with a vowel. But those are just picky things. It just would improve your writing. :) - Amy
Hiya, Tip #2) If you want to use "a" before a word such as: a lamp. You would use "a" not "an". Because lamp begins with a consonant. If you wanted to say: an elephant. You would then use "an" because elephant begins with a vowel. But those are just picky things. It just would improve your writing. :) - Amy
1/2/2006 c4 Maeve Summers
Hiya,Again, fantastic chapter! There are only couple of things that bugged me through the story. 1) Put 'their' instead of 'there'. You are trying to show possession. :) Next tip in chapter 5 review... - Amy
Hiya,Again, fantastic chapter! There are only couple of things that bugged me through the story. 1) Put 'their' instead of 'there'. You are trying to show possession. :) Next tip in chapter 5 review... - Amy
1/2/2006 c3 Maeve Summers
Hiya! I just read from Chapter 3 to Chapter 8. An amazing story, so far! I just figured I would go back and review every chapter. :) Because you deserve reviews. I haven't checked out this story in a while... because I haven't gone on to this site in forever... Keep writing! :) - Amy
Hiya! I just read from Chapter 3 to Chapter 8. An amazing story, so far! I just figured I would go back and review every chapter. :) Because you deserve reviews. I haven't checked out this story in a while... because I haven't gone on to this site in forever... Keep writing! :) - Amy
12/20/2005 c7 Dragons Jinx
ahem. you`re sorry? oh...right...i`m supposed to forgive you here aren`t i? WELL FORGET IT! update! and i mean NOW!
on other topics, i am revamping my last chappie, cause i don`t like it...cause everyone is too out of charicter. so, wanted to elt you know.
ahem. you`re sorry? oh...right...i`m supposed to forgive you here aren`t i? WELL FORGET IT! update! and i mean NOW!
on other topics, i am revamping my last chappie, cause i don`t like it...cause everyone is too out of charicter. so, wanted to elt you know.