for Oobyegat11/28/2005 c1 Amour Amorita Saphira
Hey! Nice Poem. I was having some stress time this week and your peom gave me a sense of relief. Though it's truely angst but I like the way you write it. Each stanza will phrase a feeling after using all his/her five senses. It's deep yet readable. Understanable and nice neat style. Very nice. Like a loads^^
Hey! Nice Poem. I was having some stress time this week and your peom gave me a sense of relief. Though it's truely angst but I like the way you write it. Each stanza will phrase a feeling after using all his/her five senses. It's deep yet readable. Understanable and nice neat style. Very nice. Like a loads^^
11/28/2005 c1 
9Morbid Maxwell
Interesting title...even better work! XD The title made me laugh, but I really liked the poem, you did a great job on this...glad to see! XD I feel so out of place...
Morbid Maxwell-"It's only illegal if you get caught."
9Morbid MaxwellInteresting title...even better work! XD The title made me laugh, but I really liked the poem, you did a great job on this...glad to see! XD I feel so out of place...
Morbid Maxwell-"It's only illegal if you get caught."