for Paper Wasps1/20/2006 c1 McKenzie Drestire
Beautiful
Beautiful
1/16/2006 c1 Haberdasher
this was satisfying to read. something about the last verse was so heartfelt and touching. very emotional. just that "god! i cant escape the gravity of you" it stands alone.. brilliant. - the Lady Elaine
this was satisfying to read. something about the last verse was so heartfelt and touching. very emotional. just that "god! i cant escape the gravity of you" it stands alone.. brilliant. - the Lady Elaine
12/3/2005 c1 
34Smoky Bear
wow! that's poignant! can't pick a favorite line, i'd be quoting most of the poem. the angst, frustration and confusion drip between the lines. it's definately a thinker...
34Smoky Bearwow! that's poignant! can't pick a favorite line, i'd be quoting most of the poem. the angst, frustration and confusion drip between the lines. it's definately a thinker...