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7/15/2006 c1 21001lie
very nice deary, very nice :)
12/2/2005 c1 1Black Planet
i'm going to review everything you have written.. that was an interesting poem.. i don't really take to poems but that one.. it sort of feels as though you are standing right beside the person.. seeing as the person is seeing.. and it takes you on a journey.. a sad one.. but a journey all the same.. keep up the good work alyssa!
11/29/2005 c1 13WindWing
wow...this is really good. u described the feeling of giving up hope and trying to survive really well. i in particular iked the last verse. keep writing!

(:(:(: Peace Out :):):)
11/29/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Very nice; well done. You tell a complete story here, and it goes full circle in your rhyming. Keep up the good work.

Juliet.

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