for After Dark1/25/2007 c3 
25elohimdancer319
Experimenting, indeed. I like the flow though- the short sentences make it seem choppy, but it works.
25elohimdancer319Experimenting, indeed. I like the flow though- the short sentences make it seem choppy, but it works.
1/17/2007 c3 CHIIJOY
"Beating so-fast against rib cage. The rhythm; I’ll- explode-I’ll-explode."
I loved this line and your writing style. You're an originator here. Please update soon. :D
"Beating so-fast against rib cage. The rhythm; I’ll- explode-I’ll-explode."
I loved this line and your writing style. You're an originator here. Please update soon. :D
10/12/2006 c3 9milenaa
hey there. i liked this so far. chapters aren't incredibly long and they sill say a lot. keep writing. please.
9milenaahey there. i liked this so far. chapters aren't incredibly long and they sill say a lot. keep writing. please.
8/25/2006 c3 3TurtleGoddess
I love the style this is written is, as I said in another review, and the characters have grown on me. I really want to see what happens with them! The premise for this is just so creative, and I'd love for you to continue it! So good job, and please update soon!
3TurtleGoddessI love the style this is written is, as I said in another review, and the characters have grown on me. I really want to see what happens with them! The premise for this is just so creative, and I'd love for you to continue it! So good job, and please update soon!
7/25/2006 c3 1I'm Ashley
I love this story.. The writing style is awesome.. It makes you pay attention to it.
1I'm AshleyI love this story.. The writing style is awesome.. It makes you pay attention to it.
7/23/2006 c2 Silent Force
I'm still liking your writing style; it's just so original. Both of the characters intrigue me, and I'm hoping they'll see each other again. Again, I really like how you described everything. Nice work!
I'm still liking your writing style; it's just so original. Both of the characters intrigue me, and I'm hoping they'll see each other again. Again, I really like how you described everything. Nice work!
6/20/2006 c1 3TurtleGoddess
I really like the style this is written in. It's both descriptive and a good reflection of the characters' personalities. The whole set-up of meeting at a party like that is very intriguing; I'm interested as to where you'll take it. Nice job!
3TurtleGoddessI really like the style this is written in. It's both descriptive and a good reflection of the characters' personalities. The whole set-up of meeting at a party like that is very intriguing; I'm interested as to where you'll take it. Nice job!
3/20/2006 c3 hey maria
Woah, cool, you updated.
"Connected by juice. Good name for a rock band." I loved that.
Woah, cool, you updated.
"Connected by juice. Good name for a rock band." I loved that.
3/17/2006 c3 madlyinluv cba 2 log in lol
hey awesome story!
I love it ! keep going :D xoxo
hey awesome story!
I love it ! keep going :D xoxo
3/15/2006 c3 bob
aww, wow, man, i love this story! it's so sweet, and the way it's completely without proper dialouge is a really good effect. :]
aww, wow, man, i love this story! it's so sweet, and the way it's completely without proper dialouge is a really good effect. :]
12/2/2005 c2 84this is my love for you
This is so whimsical and romantic... i love it.
And Le Tigre is awesome ^^ Kathleen Hanna is awesome.
84this is my love for youThis is so whimsical and romantic... i love it.
And Le Tigre is awesome ^^ Kathleen Hanna is awesome.
12/2/2005 c2 18Nonah
I like this steph. It's very original and interesting. I don't think I've ever really read anything like this. Well done!
18NonahI like this steph. It's very original and interesting. I don't think I've ever really read anything like this. Well done!
12/1/2005 c2 fsk
rawr.
your style is like poetry and i love it. please keep writing.
rawr.
your style is like poetry and i love it. please keep writing.
12/1/2005 c2 hey maria
So um...are you going to write more? ::smiles charmingly::
I'm listening to a song called 'Ghosts of Princes in Towers' and it matches the mood of this story perfectly...it sounds so magical and I don't care how cliche that is. Another gorgeous chapter; and the boy sounds like someone I would stalk - ahem, I mean /like./ "Prince Charming, that’s who he is. Juggles pinecones on patios, invents goofy constellation names, popcorn catcher. Sexy music man with stupid juice stain and no ambition." Beautiful. Great job.
So um...are you going to write more? ::smiles charmingly::
I'm listening to a song called 'Ghosts of Princes in Towers' and it matches the mood of this story perfectly...it sounds so magical and I don't care how cliche that is. Another gorgeous chapter; and the boy sounds like someone I would stalk - ahem, I mean /like./ "Prince Charming, that’s who he is. Juggles pinecones on patios, invents goofy constellation names, popcorn catcher. Sexy music man with stupid juice stain and no ambition." Beautiful. Great job.
12/1/2005 c1 ProxyWonker
Flatter yourself as much as you want to, babe. This was awesome. The style was very descriptive, very good. I loved it.
Flatter yourself as much as you want to, babe. This was awesome. The style was very descriptive, very good. I loved it.