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84DemonicDestiny
It's so darkish evilish...I like it! Keep writing stories at school...lol.
84DemonicDestinyIt's so darkish evilish...I like it! Keep writing stories at school...lol.
3/10/2006 c1 23Crymson Tears
woah, there are so many common thinie mah bobbers about this poem and your penname. I love the name evangeline, and i have the manuscript of a story w/that name in it. then my name is Elizabeth, and I want to be unique. now you know why i theink there are so many similarities. hmm very good poem, and it explains me perfectly. well I reviewed for you, so you review for me, ok?
23Crymson Tearswoah, there are so many common thinie mah bobbers about this poem and your penname. I love the name evangeline, and i have the manuscript of a story w/that name in it. then my name is Elizabeth, and I want to be unique. now you know why i theink there are so many similarities. hmm very good poem, and it explains me perfectly. well I reviewed for you, so you review for me, ok?
3/9/2006 c1 24The Starving Writer
Oh, so pretty, in a darkly beautiful way, of course. I realy loved the ending. Something about it made me shiver. Incredible
24The Starving WriterOh, so pretty, in a darkly beautiful way, of course. I realy loved the ending. Something about it made me shiver. Incredible
12/6/2005 c1 8Riouichi Nagashiri
This one flows better than "Rejected by You". Both are good works, but the rythm is better in this one. It has a natural pace. I like it. My question to you is, have you ever cut yourself? Sounds like it. If you have, let me know. I'm working on something about cutting. I need feedback! Love the poem tho.
~Rio
8Riouichi NagashiriThis one flows better than "Rejected by You". Both are good works, but the rythm is better in this one. It has a natural pace. I like it. My question to you is, have you ever cut yourself? Sounds like it. If you have, let me know. I'm working on something about cutting. I need feedback! Love the poem tho.
~Rio
12/1/2005 c1 21Purified Angel
hmm, your poem was dark, but oh so good xD. I really liked it, the emotion that the character portrays...it means a lot. keep up the good work
21Purified Angelhmm, your poem was dark, but oh so good xD. I really liked it, the emotion that the character portrays...it means a lot. keep up the good work
11/30/2005 c1 9violet bones
I really like this. It invokes a lot of emotion and it makes you think about suicide, and why it happens. I especially like this line: "Screaming for life she dies" It really adds to the presence of tragedy.
9violet bonesI really like this. It invokes a lot of emotion and it makes you think about suicide, and why it happens. I especially like this line: "Screaming for life she dies" It really adds to the presence of tragedy.