
2/4/2006 c1
24Sister Golden Hair
the poem is nice. however, in poetry, it's best not to blatantly tell someone what a poem is about. there are many interpretations about every poem ever written. it limits the mind. but that's just a notion. take it or leave it. but you are a decent writer for your age.

the poem is nice. however, in poetry, it's best not to blatantly tell someone what a poem is about. there are many interpretations about every poem ever written. it limits the mind. but that's just a notion. take it or leave it. but you are a decent writer for your age.
11/30/2005 c1
1k+Faithless Juliet
Heartfelt and honest; I loved the mood and theme of this. Keep up the good work.
Much lvoe,juliet.

Heartfelt and honest; I loved the mood and theme of this. Keep up the good work.
Much lvoe,juliet.