for starfish6/12/2006 c1 the naked civil servant
OH, the wondrosity :| That is legendary & surreal. the IMAGERY, i tell you, the imagery is full & bright & gorgeous & evocative, beautiful beautiful rushes, gorgeous...
wonderful :|
OH, the wondrosity :| That is legendary & surreal. the IMAGERY, i tell you, the imagery is full & bright & gorgeous & evocative, beautiful beautiful rushes, gorgeous...
wonderful :|
4/8/2006 c1 
50ScarletDreamer
that's beautiful. :) I love your imagery. And I love how this poem flows so well. Lovely job! Bravo!
(*ScarletDreamer*)
50ScarletDreamerthat's beautiful. :) I love your imagery. And I love how this poem flows so well. Lovely job! Bravo!
(*ScarletDreamer*)
4/3/2006 c1 57water lily nymph
you amaze me. don't worry, I'm reading the rest of your stuff when I can. what can I say, I'm addicted. :P
57water lily nymphyou amaze me. don't worry, I'm reading the rest of your stuff when I can. what can I say, I'm addicted. :P
1/13/2006 c1 42crinkled aster ribbon
so sweetly, romantically gorgeous. it makes my heart feel so much lighter when i read.
42crinkled aster ribbonso sweetly, romantically gorgeous. it makes my heart feel so much lighter when i read.
12/24/2005 c1 breezy nostrils
wow...i love the imagery and the kind of fantasy kind of feeling I get from this poem. Keep on going!
wow...i love the imagery and the kind of fantasy kind of feeling I get from this poem. Keep on going!
12/19/2005 c1 50Chandra-Moon
Oh, this was so elegantly written! I love the idea of this (though, rereading it, I'm not really sure what it's about, I love it anyway) and I love all the beachness of it: "like shards of seaglass dangled before the sun." Also, "stars strung around my wrists like bracelets."
Beautiful writing.
50Chandra-MoonOh, this was so elegantly written! I love the idea of this (though, rereading it, I'm not really sure what it's about, I love it anyway) and I love all the beachness of it: "like shards of seaglass dangled before the sun." Also, "stars strung around my wrists like bracelets."
Beautiful writing.
12/15/2005 c1 laquisha-anne
i think you spelled embedded wrong.
(and you call yourself a poetjksjks)
um... i like the 'make you apart of my world' part because it's like... 'i'll make you A PART of my world because i be l
i think you spelled embedded wrong.
(and you call yourself a poetjksjks)
um... i like the 'make you apart of my world' part because it's like... 'i'll make you A PART of my world because i be l
12/1/2005 c1 chaos called creation
beautiful images...made me think of a lazy day at the beach
beautiful images...made me think of a lazy day at the beach
12/1/2005 c1 63lackluster
gorgeous. i've found a new fascination to starfish and supernovas and the galaxy.
i adore the ending.
63lacklustergorgeous. i've found a new fascination to starfish and supernovas and the galaxy.
i adore the ending.
12/1/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Beautiful images of stars and starfish- five pointed, like our hands, caressing the idea of love; I like this Ocean-Like world that you created in this. Keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietBeautiful images of stars and starfish- five pointed, like our hands, caressing the idea of love; I like this Ocean-Like world that you created in this. Keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.