for My Undetected Canoodling8/30/2010 c17 notmyself
WOW This story is amazing. Seriously !
Cant wait for an uppdate ;)
WOW This story is amazing. Seriously !
Cant wait for an uppdate ;)
8/28/2010 c6 Ryhona
Who flamed you? Seriously, you could teach them a thing or two about writing! I think I like your current summary; it's probably my third or fourth time reading this story. Sorry, but I completely forgot to review, so I'll be doing it this time around. (I still can't believe that you're Secretive! That's really cool. I found this story before I knew you were up there with Myrika, haha. And I'm kinda glad!)
Who flamed you? Seriously, you could teach them a thing or two about writing! I think I like your current summary; it's probably my third or fourth time reading this story. Sorry, but I completely forgot to review, so I'll be doing it this time around. (I still can't believe that you're Secretive! That's really cool. I found this story before I knew you were up there with Myrika, haha. And I'm kinda glad!)
8/7/2010 c17 Sejal
I know you've been dealing with a lot, what with being plagiarized, and I respect your need to separate yourself from your writing in order to figure it all, but I just wanted to say that even after this long, I still love "My Undetected Canoodling" for its plot and characters and I would love if you could maybe keep going. Stay strong!
I know you've been dealing with a lot, what with being plagiarized, and I respect your need to separate yourself from your writing in order to figure it all, but I just wanted to say that even after this long, I still love "My Undetected Canoodling" for its plot and characters and I would love if you could maybe keep going. Stay strong!
7/30/2010 c17 Teen Geriatric
THREE YEARS. I GOT REALLY EXCITED BECAUSE THIS STORY IS AMAZING, AND THEN I REALISED YOU HADN'T UPDATED FOR THREE. FREAKING. YEARS.
Three. Years.
Seriously.
Excuse me while I go throw myself of a bridge.
(Not a particularly high one, mind you. Just high enough to express my distaste)
THREE YEARS. I GOT REALLY EXCITED BECAUSE THIS STORY IS AMAZING, AND THEN I REALISED YOU HADN'T UPDATED FOR THREE. FREAKING. YEARS.
Three. Years.
Seriously.
Excuse me while I go throw myself of a bridge.
(Not a particularly high one, mind you. Just high enough to express my distaste)
7/19/2010 c10 
2Bookstalker
I love this story! It's so sweet how Jane thinks that she hates Roth (sort of) but doesn't realize that he's the nice one. =)
2BookstalkerI love this story! It's so sweet how Jane thinks that she hates Roth (sort of) but doesn't realize that he's the nice one. =)
7/17/2010 c17 dipintheriverstyx
OHMYGOSH
THIS IS SO GOD!
YOU have to continue!
IF YOU DON'T I'LL SICK A VERY DRUNK AND HORNY ROBBIE ON YOU!
I love all teh T.V shpws you've mentioned by the way..
And Peter P, Seth C, & Spencer R.
OHMYGOSH
THIS IS SO GOD!
YOU have to continue!
IF YOU DON'T I'LL SICK A VERY DRUNK AND HORNY ROBBIE ON YOU!
I love all teh T.V shpws you've mentioned by the way..
And Peter P, Seth C, & Spencer R.
7/7/2010 c17 Jamiesbond
I liked this story I think I read it a few years back now but I see that nothing has continued so far. Any chance of this story getting finished?
I liked this story I think I read it a few years back now but I see that nothing has continued so far. Any chance of this story getting finished?
7/6/2010 c15 silviaxvivalavida
My God you have talent. Your story has me dying to know how it ends. I love the chemistry between these two. I hate the way both Roth and Janey haven;t discovered eachother's feelings, it's about time. I honesty think you have dragged it on too long. I hope you come back to this story soon, I has me hooked from the first sentence.
My God you have talent. Your story has me dying to know how it ends. I love the chemistry between these two. I hate the way both Roth and Janey haven;t discovered eachother's feelings, it's about time. I honesty think you have dragged it on too long. I hope you come back to this story soon, I has me hooked from the first sentence.
7/4/2010 c1 Juliet
Hello, there. It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. Your story has been nominated and selected to be added to the site. Congratulations. :D Here's your racing review:
The author who wrote this also has another account: Secretive. It's written as a journal that Jane has to turn in for psychology, in which she claims that she's in love with her best friend. Jane has a bold, funny voice. Being a light read, i recommend it for anyone who's in the mood for some laughs.
XOXO,
Juliet
Hello, there. It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. Your story has been nominated and selected to be added to the site. Congratulations. :D Here's your racing review:
The author who wrote this also has another account: Secretive. It's written as a journal that Jane has to turn in for psychology, in which she claims that she's in love with her best friend. Jane has a bold, funny voice. Being a light read, i recommend it for anyone who's in the mood for some laughs.
XOXO,
Juliet
6/10/2010 c1 20WabberJocky
Roth reminds me so much of the guy I like, it's ridiculous. Great story, I hope you decide to finish it!
20WabberJockyRoth reminds me so much of the guy I like, it's ridiculous. Great story, I hope you decide to finish it!
5/30/2010 c17 1P.F Ally
make that 2 and a half years of nothing. damnn xP update it pleasee roth's starting to act like my best friend who's really honest and is a great hugger :| except that he's not sarcastic xp
1P.F Allymake that 2 and a half years of nothing. damnn xP update it pleasee roth's starting to act like my best friend who's really honest and is a great hugger :| except that he's not sarcastic xp
5/16/2010 c17 10Sabreal
WOW, i'm loving this and I hope you continue one day:
And after reading one of your AN'S, I'm glad your finding this story (or were) so easy to work on as the pressure wasn't so big. TBH, I haven't even read (was it Master of the universe? or your universe? lol my bad, just went back and discovered it was "WHEN you own the universe") so I had no pre-conceived ideas this story was going to be amazing-
the reviews gave a little clue but frankly i could've still hated it.
The story's good. I like how it's addressed to this Mr Abernathy person but if things DO get a little R-rated, it'll be kinda awkward noting it down. Roth is a genius of a character. He has flaws (well, had) and he had moments, but he always stays true to his nature. I also find it adorable that as a 19-year-old, he's still a virgin and holding out for his "one true love"
I hope Tameka Janelle (such a typical afro-carribean name) takes full advantage of this. Love the tale, the people, and the history. Update sometime soon! XD
10SabrealWOW, i'm loving this and I hope you continue one day:
And after reading one of your AN'S, I'm glad your finding this story (or were) so easy to work on as the pressure wasn't so big. TBH, I haven't even read (was it Master of the universe? or your universe? lol my bad, just went back and discovered it was "WHEN you own the universe") so I had no pre-conceived ideas this story was going to be amazing-
the reviews gave a little clue but frankly i could've still hated it.
The story's good. I like how it's addressed to this Mr Abernathy person but if things DO get a little R-rated, it'll be kinda awkward noting it down. Roth is a genius of a character. He has flaws (well, had) and he had moments, but he always stays true to his nature. I also find it adorable that as a 19-year-old, he's still a virgin and holding out for his "one true love"
I hope Tameka Janelle (such a typical afro-carribean name) takes full advantage of this. Love the tale, the people, and the history. Update sometime soon! XD
5/16/2010 c16 Sabreal
lol, it's so blatantly obvious Roth's mystery gal is Jane herself. But I just love all the second-guessing and keeping it secretive (Haha! Your other pen-name:P)
I think I'm starting to adore this story. Early days though, and how the next few chapeters work might depend on it's existence.
lol, it's so blatantly obvious Roth's mystery gal is Jane herself. But I just love all the second-guessing and keeping it secretive (Haha! Your other pen-name:P)
I think I'm starting to adore this story. Early days though, and how the next few chapeters work might depend on it's existence.