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2/24/2015 c18 zoleka
Could my eyes be deceiving me , is this an update I see . After I saw that you updated nosiwe I was elated beyond elated and I came on this account to check if you had updated this to but was disappointed but now I'm as I said beyond elated my family is giving me funny looks right now because I'm bouncing and cackling so much and I haven't even started reading the updates I love your stories and I'm glad that I did not give up on you I guess patience and obsessively checking for your updates has paid off .sorry about the long review but I just love you so much . Know let me get back to tameka janelle and roth .
2/23/2015 c20 16mizgardenia21
This was absolutely the bestest thing to happen to me today. My mom was with me and I started flailing around when I saw that you had posted the ending to this fantastic story-which has become one of my absolute favorite books (yes book) in the whole world (I read a lot so that is indeed saying something at least for me personally). I enjoyed getting into their world and watching Tamika Janelle discover her love for Roth. It was absolutely amazing! Thanks for posting and this was more than worth the wait.
2/22/2015 c20 12Kellet
THEY'RE TOO CUTE. THEY'RE TOO TOO CUTE. I love reading them. They always make me smile.

Also, I'm really really glad you finished this story. It totally made my weekend.
2/22/2015 c18 fariswheel
Holy crap! I can't believe I forgot how good this story is! I am so glad you cam back to this, and I Will absolutely read anything you write. Thank you so much!
2/22/2015 c18 infiniti4ever
I'm so glad that you updated this story! I always have enjoyed your stories from Quandries of a quirky romantic to my undetected canoodling. You really have a gift as a writer and I love the descriptiveness of your stories, they really reel readers in! I also like how your characters arent' cliche, but just normal people going through their everyday lives. I can't believe that you've been plagarized so many times! That's crazy. But I will be really looking forward to reading your stories on your blog!
2/22/2015 c20 Lilly Wattenberg
I remember reading this in high school- now I'm about to get my masters...
Thank you for finishing!
2/22/2015 c2 69Shadowswept
I'm really enjoying this story, and I'm thrilled that I'll be able to read the whole thing without waiting for updates. Your main character is very likeable and easy to relate to. Reading this is like reading someone's diary. It has that casual, conversational style.

I like how you've twisted things around in this story. Usually, the rude guy is the player, and the girl ends up falling for him anyway. This time the guy with the charming personality is actually the one sleeping around. We haven't met her friend yet, but I'm already into Roth. It cracked me up how she bemoaned the fact that he became attractive.
2/22/2015 c20 10jeepers09
I'm another reader who just found your story and I'm SO glad I didn't find it years ago, or I'd have gone crazy waiting for you to finish it.

I love the characters. I love the way you write their bantering. I love the way they express their feelings without being sappy. I love the conflict that never gets too emo but is heart-tugging.

The whole thing was... lovely. Thank you so much for finishing it. I am off to follow you in case you keep going. :)
2/22/2015 c20 3Mass Descent
I'm here! I'm here! (In response to chapter #18)

I have been here since the beginning-and this story came out when I was in grade 11 and now it has been...a long time, but for some reason I received the update alert on my email and I was/am thrilled. I'm so glad you finished this story, and even though it took a quick trip down memory lane, I still remember how much I loved Roth and Jane. Thank you for this, it is a wonderful surprise & gift after so many years. My 17 year old self cannot wait to re-read this.
2/22/2015 c20 SkunksAreCool
Honestly, I thought that the story had ended, and now it's even better! ARGH I LOVE YOU HONESTLY! 3 Good job!
2/22/2015 c20 2LaserStrike
Omg. Thats a good trick. By which I mean waiting years ti uodate your story by which I've forgotten most of the synopsis so am forced to read it again. And I loved it just as much second tine around :)")")")")")")")):):):):):):(:(:
2/22/2015 c20 7The Latest Plague
By chance i was looking through my previous reviews and i saw this. I have always loved this story and am so glad that you finally got around to finishing it- even 8 years later. Now that you are back, i'll be checking up on you and your Secretive stories! :)
2/22/2015 c1 JL
You have no idea how happy I was when I got the email notification and realised it was for THIS STORY. I'm sending you a thousand virtual cookie bouquets for FINALLY getting me off that cliffhanger (eight bloody years later), and this ending, oh my. Also, I'm fairly sure I'm in the majority when I say amen to the one shots from Roth's perspective!
2/22/2015 c20 69Shadowswept
I just found this story, and I will be reading it from the beginning. Since I saw it was posted years ago, I sneaked a peek at this last chapter in hopes that you would have an author note at the end. I was curious about your long absence and return. So many stories are left incomplete, so I'm glad you finished yours. Then I saw that it's your birthday, and I had to wish you a happy birthday.

Congratulations on completing the story, and Happy Birthday!
7/16/2014 c17 Guest
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