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8/6/2011 c17 awesosarah
I'd just like you to know that this is one of my absolute favorite stories on here. I normally hate the journal style of writing, but you have managed to make it work and make it fascinating and really interesting.

You're characters are also really well done and really likable. Tameka Janelle is very cute, funny, interesting, and her childness is very endearing. Its hard not to like her. Robbie is a very interesting character where most of the time you hate him, but its still easy to see why she likes him, at least as a friend. And then there's Roth. You know, I think I'm in love with him. He can be so blunt and honest, but he can also be so kind, and he really cares for people like his brother and Tameka Janelle, despite their faults. Roth is like the perfect guy in a completely noncliche way. He's like the perfectly unperfect guy, if that makes sense. Roth is an amazing guy, all the readers will definitely fall in love with him.

The pacing of the story is perfect, and the description have just the right amount of detail without going overboard or underboard (yes, I know that's not a word). This story is really the most adorable, addictive, and fascinating one I've read on here. I am seriously in love with your story. I have to admit, the plot is decent, nothing special, but its really the characters that make it absolutely amazing. I've said how much I love them earlier, but I have to say again how really amazing they are, especially Roth.

Though the most depressing part of the entire thing is that its unfinished. I know you must be busy, and that you have great important things in your life, but you could even write one more chapter I would forever be in your debt. Cookies, chocolate, ponies, anything you want, its yours. And if you finished the story, I will marry you. Its not exactly legal where I live, but I will move to New York and marry you. This story is so amazing, so spectacular, I will do anything for you just write a little more. And come on, you left it at a major cliff hanger! Sorry for the long review, but its takes a lot to express how magnificent I truly feel your story is. And remember, riches, beauty, power, camels, anything you could ever want could all be yours with one simple update. ;)
7/18/2011 c16 GSquared
(I would have reviewed the most recent chapter but I already have)

Rereading this to see if it's as good as I remember and it is actually better.

Pity you haven't updated in a few years but there's always hope that you'll come back to this!
7/15/2011 c17 Ivix
I would vbe really happy if you finished this story =/

Roth is so... so lovable that I need to read more about him

pleaaase?
7/3/2011 c17 everyoneisMISunderstood
It would be seriously great if you updated anything, be it this story or something on your other account (all of your work is fantastic) but I have to say something about this story is just wonderful. Maybe it's Roth. It probably is Roth, I've always had this serious thing for nerds. But in any case, I really, REALLY hope you update this story at some time and you haven't completely abandoned this.

And by the way, congratulations on your success on this site! I know it's not easy to do as well as you have, and you earn every single praise you get.

So now that I'm done schmoozing... update? ;) Please?
6/27/2011 c17 1ravenhowards
Please update soon! :D
6/26/2011 c17 Tigger
Love it
6/10/2011 c17 2MyMuseRanAway
And then 3 1/2 years of nothing! And even worse, it's a cliffhanger. And a fairly large one at that. Update!
4/29/2011 c17 starry eyez
It makes me sad that every time I look at my alert list i never see an update for this story.

Its so well written and sweet it seems such a shame to leave it like this. Have you given up on it?
4/1/2011 c16 8WithoutException
I have to say, this is my favorite of all of your stories. Jane and Roth are the best! Which is why it makes me particularly sad that you seem to have abandoned this one...do you plan on updating it again?
3/29/2011 c17 britnit
I just re-read this story. I think this is my second favorite story of yours(Quandries is my first), although Tameka is my favorite leading lady. Poor Tameka isn't catching on to any of Roth's hints. I'm really hoping that this kiss will start something non-platonic between them. Anyway, good job!
3/21/2011 c17 8Dreamerofthesky
Great story! Haven't read any like it before! Really good! You are incredibly talented! :D I love the characters Roth and Jane! Their great! :D
2/17/2011 c1 7two closed doors
I LOVE this story! The main character's growth, though a bit abrupt(fitting, but abrupt) is great to watch and I can't wait for the follow-through. I look forward to finishing it!

(note: this review be put under chap. 17, cause I have been checking up and waiting for an update on this story for 3 years! I hope it works out)
2/4/2011 c1 kimgar
I LOVE THIS STORY I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT

as i was reading this i kept yelling at the computer screaming HE LOVES YOU IDIOT KISS HER AAW SO CUTE!

i love love love love your story as i may have mentioned earlier...

but please update SON :)
1/25/2011 c17 ReadMyMind
HURRY UP AND UPDATE! NAO!
1/22/2011 c17 Maria
DID YOU REALLY HAVE TO STOP UPDATING WHEN THEY KISSED?

i hope you get this review as some sort of motivation to um.. continue this story! anyway, i loved this story! this is actually my favourite, (well, my second favourite because A Lesson In Love 101 or whatever it's called is my favourite) I have a thing for guys in tattoos, even though i'm not allowed to like guys with tattoos, or whatever.

but anyway, you should really continue this story! it would make me, and other people very happy. good luck though! :)
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