for Strung Out in Heaven12/20/2005 c3 
22lucid-psyche
How morbid... anyway, you have a good grasp of dialogue, and you've definitely got a knack for writing in the first person. No nitpicks for this one, though it does seem that when you write in the first person, you tend to use the same voice throughout the majority of your stories.
22lucid-psycheHow morbid... anyway, you have a good grasp of dialogue, and you've definitely got a knack for writing in the first person. No nitpicks for this one, though it does seem that when you write in the first person, you tend to use the same voice throughout the majority of your stories.
12/1/2005 c1 22Looking For You
Haha. Thanks for the review, but it's just a story...definitely nothing I'm actually battling with.
22Looking For YouHaha. Thanks for the review, but it's just a story...definitely nothing I'm actually battling with.
12/1/2005 c1 68Neverlander12
I don't know what to say. At least you're honest about it and you're gonna try to quit. I wish you luck. I wish you life. And whether you're religious or not- I'll pray for you. *hugs* You're worth more than this, man. And btw- you're an excellent writer.
Smooches-CGUll_the_Wizpig
68Neverlander12I don't know what to say. At least you're honest about it and you're gonna try to quit. I wish you luck. I wish you life. And whether you're religious or not- I'll pray for you. *hugs* You're worth more than this, man. And btw- you're an excellent writer.
Smooches-CGUll_the_Wizpig