for Bittersweet Edge12/10/2005 c1 carly
The best part was how you took that quote and used it to mean something entirely different.I also loved the part where u said her whisper soft skin. I can't think of anything that could have been improved. Great story.
The best part was how you took that quote and used it to mean something entirely different.I also loved the part where u said her whisper soft skin. I can't think of anything that could have been improved. Great story.
12/8/2005 c1 gio
that story was dep. i bet u'll become a great writer even a better one then u are know (if thats even possible) so anyway yeah i liked all the different emotions in the story like from romantic to serious. it was just an awesome piece of literature. and its not like i'm a good reviewist or anything but atleast i know good when i see good. u'll go far in life with ur writing skills and im not just saying that just cuz - i actually mean it. so well yeah great story.(so when are you going to publish one of your pieces of writing?)
that story was dep. i bet u'll become a great writer even a better one then u are know (if thats even possible) so anyway yeah i liked all the different emotions in the story like from romantic to serious. it was just an awesome piece of literature. and its not like i'm a good reviewist or anything but atleast i know good when i see good. u'll go far in life with ur writing skills and im not just saying that just cuz - i actually mean it. so well yeah great story.(so when are you going to publish one of your pieces of writing?)
12/5/2005 c1 
16moscowsnow
You've handled the tenses very well. *nods* And you've managed to use great words without going over the top. I adore it! *adds to favourites* 3
16moscowsnowYou've handled the tenses very well. *nods* And you've managed to use great words without going over the top. I adore it! *adds to favourites* 3
12/3/2005 c1 Eien no Yakusoku
This was, quite honestly, one of the best short stories I've read. I was actually surprised at how good it is. The unnamed main character has such powerful emotion imbued in him that he seems real, the story written as if it were a journal entry. Bravo.
p.s. i fuckin luv ur story wouldyou let me suck ur cock.
This was, quite honestly, one of the best short stories I've read. I was actually surprised at how good it is. The unnamed main character has such powerful emotion imbued in him that he seems real, the story written as if it were a journal entry. Bravo.
p.s. i fuckin luv ur story wouldyou let me suck ur cock.
12/3/2005 c1 cab2000
dude, can you get anymore serious. that was really interesting, how many more do you have like this. It was really sad yet happy. Very interesting.
dude, can you get anymore serious. that was really interesting, how many more do you have like this. It was really sad yet happy. Very interesting.