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11/30/2008 c1 wultk
This was so refreshingly original.

I love the concept.

Good job!
1/20/2008 c1 17daughterofmusic
Aah! "If they had lived"!

Lol nice twist on Happy Ever After And All Is Well And The Happy Couple Apparently Is Perfect...Annoyingly Perfect.

~Music
12/4/2005 c1 8Shang Warrior Phoenix
This is interesting. Especially how each sentence starts with 'and' but I like it.
12/2/2005 c1 Beks
Mary, you should make this into a story! It would be really good. Strange. And maybe a little morbid...but very good. Oh and by the wya, you still haven't sent me that story yet...I hope you haven't forgotten about the Spitting Camels. Just becasue you haven't seen them yet doesn't mean they're there! Oh yes, they're watching your every move, so send it me. And update your Sir Rong story.
12/2/2005 c1 2Della C
oh come on... you've got a great set of one-liners here. write me a dang story! Write it with all the sarcasm and anger of a fantasy writer trying to break the mold! Let the bitterness flow, man!
12/2/2005 c1 fire-breathing-kitten
That's horrible! I mean that in a good way, of course (if that makes any sense XD). I especially love that last line "And they might have lived happily, if indeed, they had lived.".
12/2/2005 c1 11Tanwen-Whitefire
a tad morbid today, are we?

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