for Vicious Circle12/6/2005 c1 a lonely september
i loved the way you ended this. it was awesome. i liked this whole thing. never stop writing.
i loved the way you ended this. it was awesome. i liked this whole thing. never stop writing.
12/3/2005 c1 midnightowl
this reminds me of something that could be read at a "spoken word" or something. pretty beatnik, and i idolize mr. kerouac, so that's a high compliment :)
i love the "give up/give in" part.
this reminds me of something that could be read at a "spoken word" or something. pretty beatnik, and i idolize mr. kerouac, so that's a high compliment :)
i love the "give up/give in" part.
12/2/2005 c1 
15wickedtambourine
This was an interesting read. Very brave of you to post this. I applaud you on that. Keep writing- Raizel Green
15wickedtambourineThis was an interesting read. Very brave of you to post this. I applaud you on that. Keep writing- Raizel Green