for A Wolf Running In The Mist9/27/2006 c1 
5shadowed reality
amazing. i love your writing style, it's very complex and intelectualoh, an thanks for the review
5shadowed realityamazing. i love your writing style, it's very complex and intelectualoh, an thanks for the review
1/28/2006 c1 6Count of Casualty
This is an awesome piece. I love all the visualization and how it all seems to flow. Nice work! :)
6Count of CasualtyThis is an awesome piece. I love all the visualization and how it all seems to flow. Nice work! :)
1/11/2006 c1 1Dahl's Owl
Nice! Really nice! I'd send a PM, but I guess fictionpress doesn't have those yet. Anyway, I wanted to say, thanks for the review. You may actually be able to see my 'real' work sometime, because I'm trying to get published. :D~DO
1Dahl's OwlNice! Really nice! I'd send a PM, but I guess fictionpress doesn't have those yet. Anyway, I wanted to say, thanks for the review. You may actually be able to see my 'real' work sometime, because I'm trying to get published. :D~DO
12/23/2005 c1 73Jezsh
reminds me of what I used to write :) it's really impressive...and its symbolism just makes it better.
73Jezshreminds me of what I used to write :) it's really impressive...and its symbolism just makes it better.
12/11/2005 c1 5Mizamour
Whoa, man that is awesome! I love it! Have you ever heard Loreena McKennitt? She sings old ballads/poems, like the Highwayman and the Lady of Shalott...this reminds me of something like that, I can mentally hear her singing it. Awesome.
5MizamourWhoa, man that is awesome! I love it! Have you ever heard Loreena McKennitt? She sings old ballads/poems, like the Highwayman and the Lady of Shalott...this reminds me of something like that, I can mentally hear her singing it. Awesome.
12/10/2005 c1 59Calliope Foster
Oh dear lord this was fantastic. Like a story within a poem within something that could be a song. Beautifully done!
59Calliope FosterOh dear lord this was fantastic. Like a story within a poem within something that could be a song. Beautifully done!
12/7/2005 c1 1Changethesubject
its very deep, profound, mystical etc. i love the imagery and every line seems just right. it all fits in so well. nice!
1Changethesubjectits very deep, profound, mystical etc. i love the imagery and every line seems just right. it all fits in so well. nice!
12/5/2005 c1 136Elliptical Shapes
Very good.
infact, it's a damn sight better than very good, your writing style is excellent and very complex, you certainly have talent.
Alan.
136Elliptical ShapesVery good.
infact, it's a damn sight better than very good, your writing style is excellent and very complex, you certainly have talent.
Alan.
12/3/2005 c1 34Smoky Bear
outstanding work, well done. it's a great story and you've written it so eloquently. i really enjoyed it - tugged my heartstrings
34Smoky Bearoutstanding work, well done. it's a great story and you've written it so eloquently. i really enjoyed it - tugged my heartstrings
12/3/2005 c1 43NinjaStoryteller
Dude, this is really deep. You have the awesomest imagery sometimes... I love how you put "Written down in the snow of times past that only the trees will know" and "Swirling heavenly lights and pines into a silhouette carousel" some of the coolest lines I've ever seen! I read it a couple of times, and it's a little tough to make sense of... though it is a fun read, maybe a little hard to follow. Also kudos for your mad rhyming skills... being good at that is tough to do, I know because I try pretty hard sometimes. Oh... and that wolf makes for a really intriguing subject... I like that wolf.
43NinjaStorytellerDude, this is really deep. You have the awesomest imagery sometimes... I love how you put "Written down in the snow of times past that only the trees will know" and "Swirling heavenly lights and pines into a silhouette carousel" some of the coolest lines I've ever seen! I read it a couple of times, and it's a little tough to make sense of... though it is a fun read, maybe a little hard to follow. Also kudos for your mad rhyming skills... being good at that is tough to do, I know because I try pretty hard sometimes. Oh... and that wolf makes for a really intriguing subject... I like that wolf.
12/3/2005 c1 22when it all comes down
i really like this poem...its great! thx for revewing my poem to!
-lulu( AND RAYA AND JARRD!)
22when it all comes downi really like this poem...its great! thx for revewing my poem to!
-lulu( AND RAYA AND JARRD!)