12/3/2005 c1 Ria the Bee
Hi, let me introduce myself to you, my name is UnNoIzQoUmEi and I like to leave a critique on poetry and stories. You get your point across very well to your readers. It "stabbed" me in the heart. I'm very sorry for your loss, if I am correct. Your words flowed from your heart and stood out boldly on the page. Congratulations! I'm giving you 4 out of 5 stars! That stands for Extraodinary!