for Her Kisses12/3/2005 c1 
39SliversofSilverPain
good question... maybe the answer is forty two (Heh heh; loved your summary!)Well written poem; nicely described
39SliversofSilverPaingood question... maybe the answer is forty two (Heh heh; loved your summary!)Well written poem; nicely described
12/3/2005 c1 Sally-andersonn
The beginning had a very good flow. in the middle it got a little awkward becasue it was getting a little sentance-ish. The last two lines were really powerful.
The beginning had a very good flow. in the middle it got a little awkward becasue it was getting a little sentance-ish. The last two lines were really powerful.