for Creatures of the Night: The Miami WereBat12/4/2005 c1 
10JojoAnn
omg. this is really really good. does it really have to be only two chapters because if you made it a whole story I would read the whole thing.
10JojoAnnomg. this is really really good. does it really have to be only two chapters because if you made it a whole story I would read the whole thing.
12/4/2005 c1 17the mouse that roared
heehee. This was fabulous. I especially liked the "for the essay" part. September's a bit unreal, though-and a bit annoying. Does she only care about jobs? Other than that, nice, creative story. Have fun with your college essays...
17the mouse that roaredheehee. This was fabulous. I especially liked the "for the essay" part. September's a bit unreal, though-and a bit annoying. Does she only care about jobs? Other than that, nice, creative story. Have fun with your college essays...
12/4/2005 c1 2BlackFireyPhoenix86
That was really good... It was full of action... I love the whole fighting for the job ad, it was just so funny...
2BlackFireyPhoenix86That was really good... It was full of action... I love the whole fighting for the job ad, it was just so funny...
12/4/2005 c1 CHC
Perfect for a study break. (Examinations are evil, especially self-scheduled ones because the only scapegoat is yourself...)
Good luck with college applications! Don't do what I did (i.e. sending them off at 11:59:59 on December 30th for the December 31st deadlines) and you shall have a relaxing until the last week of March in which acceptance letters hamper friendships.
But college really isn't all that bad...
Perfect for a study break. (Examinations are evil, especially self-scheduled ones because the only scapegoat is yourself...)
Good luck with college applications! Don't do what I did (i.e. sending them off at 11:59:59 on December 30th for the December 31st deadlines) and you shall have a relaxing until the last week of March in which acceptance letters hamper friendships.
But college really isn't all that bad...
12/4/2005 c1 40Death Princess
lol this is so funny. waah im supposed 2 be doin my theo essay *sigh*. ill make this quick. September is so funny. and so weird. i luv the way u strted this off with the whole french painter thing. now tht was amusing. and original. btw i suggest tht u read ova this chap cuz theres quite a few typos but othawise this was gr8. damn i hvent even strted my essay. i am so crewed. srry anyways UPDATE SOON! oh and i luv september and brian.
40Death Princesslol this is so funny. waah im supposed 2 be doin my theo essay *sigh*. ill make this quick. September is so funny. and so weird. i luv the way u strted this off with the whole french painter thing. now tht was amusing. and original. btw i suggest tht u read ova this chap cuz theres quite a few typos but othawise this was gr8. damn i hvent even strted my essay. i am so crewed. srry anyways UPDATE SOON! oh and i luv september and brian.
12/4/2005 c1 4jammi
hahaha, nice. I will love to see how this ends, although it has all the makings of a long story, a one shot is cute.
September is an awesome character, and so's Brian.
4jammihahaha, nice. I will love to see how this ends, although it has all the makings of a long story, a one shot is cute.
September is an awesome character, and so's Brian.
12/4/2005 c1 49Shadow Demoness413
*giggles insanely* I likes it! It's good to have you back! Although, since this is in two parts... technically this isn't a one shot.. whatever, it's still really good!
49Shadow Demoness413*giggles insanely* I likes it! It's good to have you back! Although, since this is in two parts... technically this isn't a one shot.. whatever, it's still really good!
12/4/2005 c1 KB
Tess darling, you are my favorite :)write more, oh goddess of words!~KB
Tess darling, you are my favorite :)write more, oh goddess of words!~KB
12/4/2005 c1 5I Am Vast
GOD, September, wasn't it OBVIOUS? Of COURSE he's a werebat, what else could he possibly be? XD Awesome story.
5I Am VastGOD, September, wasn't it OBVIOUS? Of COURSE he's a werebat, what else could he possibly be? XD Awesome story.
12/4/2005 c1 4Stylo
lol lol lol lol!
omg! honestly? i loved it!
you've been missing way too long, girl. ;)
the only mistake was: when they're walking from the ad board, ya mention brians name before we know it.
other than that...
*screams*
saturday is way too far away!
*bambamthebloody*
4Stylolol lol lol lol!
omg! honestly? i loved it!
you've been missing way too long, girl. ;)
the only mistake was: when they're walking from the ad board, ya mention brians name before we know it.
other than that...
*screams*
saturday is way too far away!
*bambamthebloody*
12/4/2005 c1 11Heather A. Moeller
Wow...good story first of all. I saw a couple of spelling mistakes, that are only missing a letter,though instead of thought for example. Good work ^^
11Heather A. MoellerWow...good story first of all. I saw a couple of spelling mistakes, that are only missing a letter,though instead of thought for example. Good work ^^
12/4/2005 c1 Bob n Kazzi
Very good. It made me smile.
Very good. It made me smile.
12/4/2005 c1 5anamika
Ah yes the werebat how stupid of u september not to understand pls pls pls pls continue this it be a highly hilariously cute story so please...perfect first chaptertnt ciao
5anamikaAh yes the werebat how stupid of u september not to understand pls pls pls pls continue this it be a highly hilariously cute story so please...perfect first chaptertnt ciao
12/3/2005 c1 4chthonical
Lord, I enjoyed this story. Funny running commentary and witty repartee = love. I know you say it's a one-shot, but the title makes it look like you'll write more stories about other night-creatures. *hinthint* Will you? :D
4chthonicalLord, I enjoyed this story. Funny running commentary and witty repartee = love. I know you say it's a one-shot, but the title makes it look like you'll write more stories about other night-creatures. *hinthint* Will you? :D