
12/4/2005 c1
17sunday night sky
i relate to this a lot, especially the first and last stanza. 'The worst of the lotA rotten appleThe cream of the cropA shining star' this stanza is great. tbh i like pretty much all of it. anyway, il stop rambling now - great work!

i relate to this a lot, especially the first and last stanza. 'The worst of the lotA rotten appleThe cream of the cropA shining star' this stanza is great. tbh i like pretty much all of it. anyway, il stop rambling now - great work!
12/4/2005 c1 ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1
It's really good. I like it, the general messgae and it's got a certain simplicity.
It's really good. I like it, the general messgae and it's got a certain simplicity.