for Sing For Me12/31/2005 c1 
20Once in a blue moon
I like this poem, perhaps, because it seems so "historically" romantic to be wooed by song. I loved the line "a little shrill, maybe, a little high, baby", embracing imperfection.
Oh, just one thing: line five. I feel like it would make more sense as "you know..."
20Once in a blue moonI like this poem, perhaps, because it seems so "historically" romantic to be wooed by song. I loved the line "a little shrill, maybe, a little high, baby", embracing imperfection.
Oh, just one thing: line five. I feel like it would make more sense as "you know..."
12/16/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
aw very cute and sweet... I love it.. the whole idea is cute and the way you describe the voice is great
612simpleplan13aw very cute and sweet... I love it.. the whole idea is cute and the way you describe the voice is great
12/14/2005 c1 13Shadowhound
okay, so i was mistaken, i have a bit more time.
i like your emphasis on sound/music. this is really interesting. it reminds me faintly of Orb and Natasha from "Being a Green Mother." (Natasha is a guy despite his name, Orb is a girl.) it is a good book, and i suggest you try reading it. this poem brings back memories...good poem.
13Shadowhoundokay, so i was mistaken, i have a bit more time.
i like your emphasis on sound/music. this is really interesting. it reminds me faintly of Orb and Natasha from "Being a Green Mother." (Natasha is a guy despite his name, Orb is a girl.) it is a good book, and i suggest you try reading it. this poem brings back memories...good poem.
12/5/2005 c1 30Drizit
Hey this sounds familiar.
Accoustic guitar,Won't you play for me?
Remember that line? Lol, yeah sure brought back memories... not in a gayish way mind you. In the process of getting a chick.
Anyway, this sounds much better than what you wrote (or tried to). Well done. Of course, i want to see what would happen if you finished that one *points to previously typed half-baked poem*
30DrizitHey this sounds familiar.
Accoustic guitar,Won't you play for me?
Remember that line? Lol, yeah sure brought back memories... not in a gayish way mind you. In the process of getting a chick.
Anyway, this sounds much better than what you wrote (or tried to). Well done. Of course, i want to see what would happen if you finished that one *points to previously typed half-baked poem*