for The Day I Decided to Write a Book of Poetry9/28/2006 c2 sunday night sky
i've felt like this before... nice piece. i like the repetition, simple but structured. :D
i've felt like this before... nice piece. i like the repetition, simple but structured. :D
9/28/2006 c1 sunday night sky
lol this one made me laugh! i love the rhyme and rhythm, it works really well :)
lol this one made me laugh! i love the rhyme and rhythm, it works really well :)
9/21/2006 c11 
47Violet Marx
I fell head over heels for this one, especially the last line! You've got a talent.
47Violet MarxI fell head over heels for this one, especially the last line! You've got a talent.
9/21/2006 c7 Violet Marx
I though this was a poem about war until I looked at the last word. Then I laughed. That's wonderful!
I though this was a poem about war until I looked at the last word. Then I laughed. That's wonderful!
9/21/2006 c6 Violet Marx
I like the idea of seeing black and white, though I would've liked it better if it was some bright color, or several of them. Maybe go into description of how you see gray and yellow, the good and the bad of becoming an adult. Something like that.
I like the idea of seeing black and white, though I would've liked it better if it was some bright color, or several of them. Maybe go into description of how you see gray and yellow, the good and the bad of becoming an adult. Something like that.