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11/9/2006 c1 82Riley Adams
Very nice work! This poem gives a very clear description of the emotion and physical state of being when the event happened. It gives the reader a chance to look through a window into your memories, which is not something a lot of writers can accoplish very well.

Great job- keep writing!

:)
3/13/2006 c1 hoowdoideletethisaccount
I like the imagery in this poem. It's seems to be quite metaphorical, and I like that. I thought your summary was funny, though; I adore the snow. ;) Of course I live in Canada, so some people would say me liking snow is kinda a necessary thing- ya know, either like it or go crazy, because there's lots of it around. lol

I don't really like the word "did" stuck in the middle of lines of poetry. It jars the rhythm. "the stars brightly start to shine" and "then lightly ever the snow falls" sound just fine.

Nice poem, man. :)
1/31/2006 c1 41sarah1491
I like it. :D
12/22/2005 c1 30whentherainfalls
hey thanx for your review =)

hm i like this poem; though it feels like its missing just a little something.it has potential no doubt.so keep it up!~ashley~
12/11/2005 c1 10just a teardrop
this is so gorgeous. the first stanza is breathtaking
12/6/2005 c1 92Fate Defied
beautiful imagery, i loved this one. gorgeously done. i don't like the snow much either, cept for skiing, but otherwise, i just like it for school cancellations. nicely done poem. i love it. :) k/w

in memory of him,~shadow

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