for Breaking Free12/28/2005 c1 
15butterfly-touch
Oh wow, this is a beautiful piece, and I'm surprise its one of your first poems, because you seem to be like a natural. Well done, keep writing! Love, Ruzz
15butterfly-touchOh wow, this is a beautiful piece, and I'm surprise its one of your first poems, because you seem to be like a natural. Well done, keep writing! Love, Ruzz
12/6/2005 c1 Aslam
i LOVED the analogy you made with the butterfly, and i liked the way you said that the words "i hate you" are so pointlessly overused.One thing that absolutely irritates me is people who use those 3words all the time! well done
-aslam
i LOVED the analogy you made with the butterfly, and i liked the way you said that the words "i hate you" are so pointlessly overused.One thing that absolutely irritates me is people who use those 3words all the time! well done
-aslam