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12/6/2005 c1 a red dot
wow that was totally crazy!...i loved it!
12/6/2005 c1 39SliversofSilverPain
Was this written after reading DragonSinger? the Don't Leave me Alone sounds like it... I like this.The way you've portrayed this is well.Good use of rhymth; it flows very nicely, and nice adjectives.(I won't offer any advice because I'm terrible at this myself, and anything I offered would be most likely wrong) ^_^

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