for Grief12/6/2005 c1 
39SliversofSilverPain
Was this written after reading DragonSinger? the Don't Leave me Alone sounds like it... I like this.The way you've portrayed this is well.Good use of rhymth; it flows very nicely, and nice adjectives.(I won't offer any advice because I'm terrible at this myself, and anything I offered would be most likely wrong) ^_^
39SliversofSilverPainWas this written after reading DragonSinger? the Don't Leave me Alone sounds like it... I like this.The way you've portrayed this is well.Good use of rhymth; it flows very nicely, and nice adjectives.(I won't offer any advice because I'm terrible at this myself, and anything I offered would be most likely wrong) ^_^