for Living Next Door12/18/2010 c8 Amanda S
Oh man, I have missed you and this story way too much
I am so glad to have you back :D
Oh man, I have missed you and this story way too much
I am so glad to have you back :D
12/14/2010 c8 
2ElleAyyeBabii
Four things:
1) You are one of the few authors on fictionpress who is still worth reading.
2) Your writing is superb, and your characters are so well developed. (However, I still question the whole 'wood' thing. lol)
3) Thank you for finaly updating. :)
4) Update again soon, please. :D
2ElleAyyeBabiiFour things:
1) You are one of the few authors on fictionpress who is still worth reading.
2) Your writing is superb, and your characters are so well developed. (However, I still question the whole 'wood' thing. lol)
3) Thank you for finaly updating. :)
4) Update again soon, please. :D
12/12/2010 c8 XxXKBXxX
I just love this story. I hope it's gonna work out between Lynne and Josh. I can't wait for the rest!^-^
I just love this story. I hope it's gonna work out between Lynne and Josh. I can't wait for the rest!^-^
12/8/2010 c8 bek
WOWOWOWOWOOWOWOWOW! this story is AMAZING!
WOWOWOWOWOOWOWOWOW! this story is AMAZING!
12/7/2010 c8 HI
ferufherugh I think i'm in love.. with this story.
PLEASE UPDATE
ferufherugh I think i'm in love.. with this story.
PLEASE UPDATE
12/6/2010 c8 History of Blisters
I. LOVED. IT. Therefore, I shall 'grace' *ahem* you with one of my few reviews. Seriously, I've been on Fictionpress for quite some time and this is, like, my 2nd issued review. Your story is one of the few that makes me laugh like an idiot in front of the computer. I swear, I got a few strange looks because of the weird-out-of-the-blue laughter. Anywho, as I was saying: Josh Mitchells... *sighs* definitely one of my favourite Fictionpress characters. When he was blushing and stuff, I seriously had to tell myself 'Be still, my beating heart.' I definitely loved the whole jersey-giving concept. *swoons* I shall end this before I drool. I don't mean to sound pushy or anything when I say... UPDATE! (:
I. LOVED. IT. Therefore, I shall 'grace' *ahem* you with one of my few reviews. Seriously, I've been on Fictionpress for quite some time and this is, like, my 2nd issued review. Your story is one of the few that makes me laugh like an idiot in front of the computer. I swear, I got a few strange looks because of the weird-out-of-the-blue laughter. Anywho, as I was saying: Josh Mitchells... *sighs* definitely one of my favourite Fictionpress characters. When he was blushing and stuff, I seriously had to tell myself 'Be still, my beating heart.' I definitely loved the whole jersey-giving concept. *swoons* I shall end this before I drool. I don't mean to sound pushy or anything when I say... UPDATE! (:
12/5/2010 c8 Lanzador Verde
Whoop whoop, you're back, definitely going on favourites now. Hesitated cos I saw your last update was ages ago, and I thought you gave up on fictionpress (in my defense, being the retarded little kid I am, I never read author notes for some reason). But on to the story, the chapter was great again (let me compliment you for the other chapters) and do I detect the remnants of a childhood crush? Facepalm at the mockingbird though, my mum would probably do the same, 'cept she wouldn't mind me terrorising the local wildlife (demonic magpies). But it was lolworthy :3 - btw could you tell me what that face is? It's awesome yet after a year I still don't know what it means...
Whoop whoop, you're back, definitely going on favourites now. Hesitated cos I saw your last update was ages ago, and I thought you gave up on fictionpress (in my defense, being the retarded little kid I am, I never read author notes for some reason). But on to the story, the chapter was great again (let me compliment you for the other chapters) and do I detect the remnants of a childhood crush? Facepalm at the mockingbird though, my mum would probably do the same, 'cept she wouldn't mind me terrorising the local wildlife (demonic magpies). But it was lolworthy :3 - btw could you tell me what that face is? It's awesome yet after a year I still don't know what it means...
12/4/2010 c8 1matchutea
Haha, Adorable. ;D
If ONLY.
Sebastian seems to have a little thing for Lynne.
Leap and Viv should end up together.
Samantha's a biotch . ;D
Josh should confess sooner or later before Seb confesses to Lynne. _
Amazing, Please update. ;D
1matchuteaHaha, Adorable. ;D
If ONLY.
Sebastian seems to have a little thing for Lynne.
Leap and Viv should end up together.
Samantha's a biotch . ;D
Josh should confess sooner or later before Seb confesses to Lynne. _
Amazing, Please update. ;D
12/4/2010 c8 5AllINeedIsYou
I LOVE THIS STORY. You need to get your but moving and write more! Update as soon as possible!
5AllINeedIsYouI LOVE THIS STORY. You need to get your but moving and write more! Update as soon as possible!
12/3/2010 c8 11Katie15
Thanks for the update! It was long and full of delicious awkwardness - my two favourite things! I understand how you want to go back and proofread everything but, if it makes you feel any better, I'm very impressed by your writing pre-college. You had direction and it made it easy for you to pick up where you left off.
Have you found character pictures yet? Are you thinking that the story only has a few chapters left? I remember reading that in one of your previous A/Ns. All the best with the next chapter!
Thanks for the update! It was long and full of delicious awkwardness - my two favourite things! I understand how you want to go back and proofread everything but, if it makes you feel any better, I'm very impressed by your writing pre-college. You had direction and it made it easy for you to pick up where you left off.
Have you found character pictures yet? Are you thinking that the story only has a few chapters left? I remember reading that in one of your previous A/Ns. All the best with the next chapter!
12/2/2010 c8 1glamoureste
AH my God!
I literally screamed out of joy at my computer when I had seen you uploaded! It's been a while since a good story has been updated on FictionPress, and I'm very glad you've come back! I hope you succeed with your completion date in 2011 because I would absolutely love more frequent updates. So thank you for this very enjoyable read. :)
1glamouresteAH my God!
I literally screamed out of joy at my computer when I had seen you uploaded! It's been a while since a good story has been updated on FictionPress, and I'm very glad you've come back! I hope you succeed with your completion date in 2011 because I would absolutely love more frequent updates. So thank you for this very enjoyable read. :)
12/2/2010 c8 Amycakes
YOU MADE MY WEEK. I LOVE YOU.
I'm pretty sure that's all that can be said really.
I'm so glad you're still writing this story, I adore it.
YOU MADE MY WEEK. I LOVE YOU.
I'm pretty sure that's all that can be said really.
I'm so glad you're still writing this story, I adore it.
12/1/2010 c8 Everlasting Dreams
Update son love ! Your chapters are so long (in a GOD way!), that for a second, I thought I was on chapter 15 or something !
Update son love ! Your chapters are so long (in a GOD way!), that for a second, I thought I was on chapter 15 or something !