for Living Next Door12/8/2005 c1 sexyz-bratz
i lovei t so far! keep it up! and can i get a description on how she looks like? and what her name is at least? and totally worth continuing. defenitley putting u in my fave stories.
i lovei t so far! keep it up! and can i get a description on how she looks like? and what her name is at least? and totally worth continuing. defenitley putting u in my fave stories.
12/8/2005 c1 ealuv79
this is really very good. I would be really interested in this story so please continue it.
this is really very good. I would be really interested in this story so please continue it.
12/8/2005 c1 accountdeactivated22
I really have no idea why no one has reviewed this yet, so I suppose I'll be the first. I have two words for you, "Thank You.". After spending the last hour or so reading stories that have lines like, "Than I thogt OH MY GOD cuz he was totally hott." It's very refreshing to read a story with actual English. This is a promising story and I intend to keep reading as many updates as you have.. which I hope will be many and will come quickly. Toodles.
I really have no idea why no one has reviewed this yet, so I suppose I'll be the first. I have two words for you, "Thank You.". After spending the last hour or so reading stories that have lines like, "Than I thogt OH MY GOD cuz he was totally hott." It's very refreshing to read a story with actual English. This is a promising story and I intend to keep reading as many updates as you have.. which I hope will be many and will come quickly. Toodles.
12/8/2005 c1 anonymous sp
nice.
nice.
12/8/2005 c1 Ren
Cute.
Cute.
12/8/2005 c1 the used
i like this one, more than your other storyplease update soon!
i like this one, more than your other storyplease update soon!
12/8/2005 c1 cupsofcoffee
this is so cool! please continue!
this is so cool! please continue!
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i thought this first chapter was absolutely hilarious. it was really good! extremely catchy and not at all very serious. definitely worth continuing, hope the ideas still come through! i can definitely see a lot of potential, but i hope you don't become too cliche with this. ^_^;;
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i thought this first chapter was absolutely hilarious. it was really good! extremely catchy and not at all very serious. definitely worth continuing, hope the ideas still come through! i can definitely see a lot of potential, but i hope you don't become too cliche with this. ^_^;;
12/8/2005 c1 9HiryuuGekijou
XD That was utterly brilliant. And I didn't have those problems during highschool, bring just an average 3.0 gpa student, and not too into doing homework ;) but in college I have that problem all the time. Damn next door neighbors and their Black Eyed Peas. Anyway, that was entirely too funny. And the hot next door neighbor... Jealous. XD That reminded me of my crush in highschool. Oh man... good times. Hahahaha Right... good story. Bravo! *two thumbs up*
9HiryuuGekijouXD That was utterly brilliant. And I didn't have those problems during highschool, bring just an average 3.0 gpa student, and not too into doing homework ;) but in college I have that problem all the time. Damn next door neighbors and their Black Eyed Peas. Anyway, that was entirely too funny. And the hot next door neighbor... Jealous. XD That reminded me of my crush in highschool. Oh man... good times. Hahahaha Right... good story. Bravo! *two thumbs up*