
8/16/2006 c1 faking closure
oh oh okay, hah i understand. i was a little confused, so hah thanks for explaining :)
-naomi
ps: i hope anyone who reads that poem knows that i purposefully wrote 'time' instead of 'thyme'.. i was just thinking about that, its been bugging me hah
oh oh okay, hah i understand. i was a little confused, so hah thanks for explaining :)
-naomi
ps: i hope anyone who reads that poem knows that i purposefully wrote 'time' instead of 'thyme'.. i was just thinking about that, its been bugging me hah
8/16/2006 c1
2having reached closure
oh, hah thats very cute, i like. (excuse me for the lack of a good review, ive never been good at writing reviews.. ever. but i like the poem :) )
-naomi
ps: which part of the poem was the reference to simon and garfunkle? because ive never listened to them in my life... well except maybe once or twice a few years ago with my dad, but yea..

oh, hah thats very cute, i like. (excuse me for the lack of a good review, ive never been good at writing reviews.. ever. but i like the poem :) )
-naomi
ps: which part of the poem was the reference to simon and garfunkle? because ive never listened to them in my life... well except maybe once or twice a few years ago with my dad, but yea..
8/15/2006 c1
879Moondog Dozier
This has a wonderful individualness that is relatable. The humor and the reality of it really capture what we care about in others. Excellent work.

This has a wonderful individualness that is relatable. The humor and the reality of it really capture what we care about in others. Excellent work.
8/12/2006 c1
127drblueface
Love is everything in the world that I don't understand, and so much more.
I love the message, the layout, the delivery.
Great writing! ^_^

Love is everything in the world that I don't understand, and so much more.
I love the message, the layout, the delivery.
Great writing! ^_^
8/2/2006 c1
79Magical Rainflier
I like this one! Especially the first line. Such a creative piece. =^.^=

I like this one! Especially the first line. Such a creative piece. =^.^=
7/28/2006 c1
270dustytiger
i like t his piece a lot, it made me smile, and think too, i'm not really sure what exactly it's supposed to mean, clearly it's about someone i don't know, but it's really well done, i'm babbling aren't i? well thank you for sharing this, and thank you for the review

i like t his piece a lot, it made me smile, and think too, i'm not really sure what exactly it's supposed to mean, clearly it's about someone i don't know, but it's really well done, i'm babbling aren't i? well thank you for sharing this, and thank you for the review
7/25/2006 c1
14Love in the Roses
Aw, so sweet. Makes me smile and think at the same time. Very sweet!

Aw, so sweet. Makes me smile and think at the same time. Very sweet!
7/20/2006 c1 the-narration
wow =]
i got swept away. this is so...truthful. deep. meaningful.
its wonderful.
wow =]
i got swept away. this is so...truthful. deep. meaningful.
its wonderful.