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11/26/2009 c1 19Morncreek
Intense, visual, and emotive - yum. :) I believe the end could use some tweaking, as the tone or rhythm doesn't match what precedes it. Still, quite excellent.
2/12/2006 c1 62BloodBrother
I think the last two lines could have used some better poetic language, as their tone doesn't really mix with the rest of the poem, which is superb, IMO.

Keep writing.
12/17/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
wow.. I wasnt expecting that ending... awesome... I lvoe the descriptions

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