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4/10/2007 c1 kris bartolome
WOW. so powerful. have your parents read this?
3/23/2007 c1 d.dark.messiah
Very straight to the point. Directed at parents. Nice nice...

I know our parents can be meddlesome and some if not most of the time wrong, but you know what? Once you reach that point where YOU are the parent(though you may claim that you won't do the same thing), you nay act like them too. Well that's one of the things that you will have to learn some point but don't you worry i'll always be here to help you realize this. Great job!
12/14/2005 c1 3Nyaron
This is so sad... but I can relate... great job on the poem.
12/10/2005 c1 1Belittled Hearts
I don't know anyone who hasn't felt that way before. This poem is raw, and I like it...
12/9/2005 c1 23comtesssorelli
That's so sad... but unfortunately very true, that's often what runs through the mind of a child who's parents have marital problems. Children can be so selfless. Sure, they have their own desires to make everything better so life is better for them, but it's making others happy. You really captured it all quite well. I especialy liked the last stanza.

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