for Shakespeare2/2/2010 c1 
8sealednectar
Ah, loved it. Made me smile. Reminds me of 'Love Story' by Taylor Swift. That's a good thing, in my opinion.
8sealednectarAh, loved it. Made me smile. Reminds me of 'Love Story' by Taylor Swift. That's a good thing, in my opinion.
12/11/2009 c1 fleur de l'est
A refreshingly original thought!
The poem's predictable and unpredictable at the same time, both in terms of rhyme and message; just like love itself.
A refreshingly original thought!
The poem's predictable and unpredictable at the same time, both in terms of rhyme and message; just like love itself.
8/15/2009 c1 23Snazzilicious
I am in no ways at ALL a Romeo and Juliet fan, but I seriously love this. "You are my bleeding Romeo" just sounds so...*insert better word than I can think of here*
Sorry, 5am, not great brain functioning time...that's about it. Good job.
23SnazziliciousI am in no ways at ALL a Romeo and Juliet fan, but I seriously love this. "You are my bleeding Romeo" just sounds so...*insert better word than I can think of here*
Sorry, 5am, not great brain functioning time...that's about it. Good job.
8/14/2009 c1 Sir Pebbles
I'm going to admit to you now: I'm not exactly great with poetry. But I really liked this. Especially the last line. Good job.
(Also, I recently read Romeo and Juliet, and - once I got over the original, "What the hell does this mean" - I really enjoyed it. XD)
I'm going to admit to you now: I'm not exactly great with poetry. But I really liked this. Especially the last line. Good job.
(Also, I recently read Romeo and Juliet, and - once I got over the original, "What the hell does this mean" - I really enjoyed it. XD)
3/8/2009 c1 10Elephant-Artist
Great poem. I like Shakespeare a lot especially romeo and Juliet. Great job. If it were longer and more descriptive then it would be better. It is always hard for me to think of constructive criticism because when I think something is good then there is nothing that needs to be changed. Please read and review something of mine. It would be greatly appreciated.
10Elephant-ArtistGreat poem. I like Shakespeare a lot especially romeo and Juliet. Great job. If it were longer and more descriptive then it would be better. It is always hard for me to think of constructive criticism because when I think something is good then there is nothing that needs to be changed. Please read and review something of mine. It would be greatly appreciated.
1/19/2009 c1 270queenvixta
This is really great! I liked it a lot. Very different to a lot of the 'Romeo and Juliet' poems out there.
Well done! =]
~SayIt'sWrong
270queenvixtaThis is really great! I liked it a lot. Very different to a lot of the 'Romeo and Juliet' poems out there.
Well done! =]
~SayIt'sWrong
8/23/2007 c1 half-sketched.staccatos
konnichi wa
This was amazing! I loved it! Absolutely loved it! "I am your fallen Juliet/you are my bleeding Romeo" - wow! This poem was so awesome!
Paalam
-Shan-
konnichi wa
This was amazing! I loved it! Absolutely loved it! "I am your fallen Juliet/you are my bleeding Romeo" - wow! This poem was so awesome!
Paalam
-Shan-
11/27/2006 c1 21servatis-a-pereculum
I like this one! It's short, but it somehow captures something...You've been added to my Favorite Authors list!
21servatis-a-pereculumI like this one! It's short, but it somehow captures something...You've been added to my Favorite Authors list!
10/26/2006 c1 3Da Vinci at Work
Another very touching free verse poem. I like how it all ties in with Shakespeare.
The last line seems to linger in the air: "th eplay was just for show"...
3Da Vinci at WorkAnother very touching free verse poem. I like how it all ties in with Shakespeare.
The last line seems to linger in the air: "th eplay was just for show"...