for Ba da bump7/7/2007 c1 
94AK the Twilight
Hmm, outside of the odd format, there's really a lot going for this. Maybe the anonymity is its strong suit. This is a poem with a lot of strengths. I think that maybe a bit stronger word choices could make this even better. Great job, overall.
94AK the TwilightHmm, outside of the odd format, there's really a lot going for this. Maybe the anonymity is its strong suit. This is a poem with a lot of strengths. I think that maybe a bit stronger word choices could make this even better. Great job, overall.