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12/26/2005 c1 20sloppy firsts
i like it to lol

very cool.
12/24/2005 c1 19Pink Sparrow
oh my gosh, I love this so much! I love the way its written and just everything, its so pretty! I love it!
12/21/2005 c1 24frayedlifeforce
i love this. you wrote it so well. 'a feather of light, graces with beauty and gives me wings'. well done, those lines and all of it really, are just so beautiful.
12/18/2005 c1 21Phantoms-fallen-angel
Hey maggie. This was a really beautifull poem, it's nice to see you write on the lighter side of things for once... Keep me posted on any cool poems to come. Love your work, keep it up.Cheers! Lyss
12/17/2005 c1 1Changethesubject
love! this was very well written. i liked the subject of the poem - the feather of light. it was original and just...cool. i really liked this.
12/14/2005 c1 858Anna178
First off this is a beautiful poem. I particulary like the 3rd to last paragraph, mainly because it's worded amazingly. I like how you used feathers in this poem, It gives the poem a sort of air and image that really helps the words out.

12/13/2005 c1 58Haven of the Shadows
Beautiful. I think that I've fallen in love with this poem.
12/11/2005 c1 30candyaddict
Sounds like a ray of hope concept, which I personally have always liked. The use of a feather is different, in a good way. I enjoyed this, it was, well, uplifting. Corny, but true. Beautiful work.
12/11/2005 c1 64Kassia Scarlett
Wow. It's so pretty. And so relaxed, its like you've finally found your happy place. It reminded me of at the end of a long day putting your head down on a lovely feather pillow. Ah
12/11/2005 c1 37Icefallenangel
Its a nice read but I would be much more pleased if the 3-line stanzas followed the same meter... but I'm just a freak for syllables when in verse so I suppose its just fine your way as well! Bravo!
12/11/2005 c1 41Suicidal Skies
It's ..gorgeous, fresh and new ^^ Great writing style you have.
12/10/2005 c1 83White is a Sin
interesting how you set it out, well thought out and great!

i like it!

thanks for YOUR reviews
12/10/2005 c1 27Sama-T
Hey thats new great writing loved it

keep it up
12/10/2005 c1 34Extraho-Uxor
Interesting subject for a poem and I can only imagine where such ana inspiration came from. I think your descriptions made it seem a little too... sweet. I think the whole meaning of this is lost in the organization but overall, this is most certainly a wonderful piece of poetry
12/9/2005 c1 11jaepoe
Not weird at all, i like it too, the first two stanzas especially. good job.

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