for Shattered Glass2/16/2006 c1 
35Infinity Plus One
Beautiful! I'm adding you to author alert... Thank you for the review.
35Infinity Plus OneBeautiful! I'm adding you to author alert... Thank you for the review.
12/13/2005 c1 18Duck8
i love the intensity of this it really rings true am sending u HUGE huge vibes chin up huni. The shapes of the poem works well giving it strength cant really think of what to say other than go u :)
18Duck8i love the intensity of this it really rings true am sending u HUGE huge vibes chin up huni. The shapes of the poem works well giving it strength cant really think of what to say other than go u :)
12/12/2005 c1 124in theory
Aw wow, this is so emotional. I really love the "ecstasy/pain/it's all the same..", very dramatic. *huggles* things will work out Aileh.
124in theoryAw wow, this is so emotional. I really love the "ecstasy/pain/it's all the same..", very dramatic. *huggles* things will work out Aileh.
12/10/2005 c1 Decollage
The raw emotion here fit nicely into the lines and stanza and rhyme scheme. Good work; while this is a somewhat common topic, you've take a spin on it. I love the use of the phrase 'stabbed me in the front'.
The raw emotion here fit nicely into the lines and stanza and rhyme scheme. Good work; while this is a somewhat common topic, you've take a spin on it. I love the use of the phrase 'stabbed me in the front'.
12/10/2005 c1 39SliversofSilverPain
wow. Love the use of rhyme, and especially the rhyming of the opposites; so cool! Brilliant concepts, but sad. Very good poem!
39SliversofSilverPainwow. Love the use of rhyme, and especially the rhyming of the opposites; so cool! Brilliant concepts, but sad. Very good poem!