for The Poison of Betrayal12/13/2005 c1 NO LONGER USING
Three words:get ready for this...OH MY GAWD...this is so good. belive me you have got to keep updating this. yOu've done it again...i'm hooked. THe descrition was oh so perfect it created the perfect mood. I loved it, i cannot stress this enough...if you know whats good for you...you'll udate this pronto...I've only read a couple of your old stories and i saying this loud and clear this is the best, master work. Phew got that out in time. Anywhoo all i've go to say is great job. keep writing or typing this whichver, i want to read more of this...
Three words:get ready for this...OH MY GAWD...this is so good. belive me you have got to keep updating this. yOu've done it again...i'm hooked. THe descrition was oh so perfect it created the perfect mood. I loved it, i cannot stress this enough...if you know whats good for you...you'll udate this pronto...I've only read a couple of your old stories and i saying this loud and clear this is the best, master work. Phew got that out in time. Anywhoo all i've go to say is great job. keep writing or typing this whichver, i want to read more of this...
12/11/2005 c1 
7Alankria
That was incredible; I think it's the best thing of yours that I've read so far. The way you described everything was perfect, it really drew me into Virixia's heart. And as for the ending...well, perfect. Sorry not to offer up any critiques but I couldn't find any here.
7AlankriaThat was incredible; I think it's the best thing of yours that I've read so far. The way you described everything was perfect, it really drew me into Virixia's heart. And as for the ending...well, perfect. Sorry not to offer up any critiques but I couldn't find any here.
12/10/2005 c1 25La Velvetine
Aw, this is so beautiful. I like the idea of a faithless angel. It is very unconventional yet powerful at the same time. It really conveys the deep regret of this woman. And, my gosh, your choice of names is nice as well. Do write more. This vignette captures the humamity of love so poignantly.
25La VelvetineAw, this is so beautiful. I like the idea of a faithless angel. It is very unconventional yet powerful at the same time. It really conveys the deep regret of this woman. And, my gosh, your choice of names is nice as well. Do write more. This vignette captures the humamity of love so poignantly.