for Liar Liar4/23/2006 c1 
20Lilliana Krishante
I am no fan of liars either. Lies of any kind. Neither the emotional ones either, where one hides who they truly are inside. You've captured it quite good.
20Lilliana KrishanteI am no fan of liars either. Lies of any kind. Neither the emotional ones either, where one hides who they truly are inside. You've captured it quite good.
2/22/2006 c1 15alter-ego52
I really like this. And I'm not usually into reading things like this. But this is really good, and I love all your choices of words.
15alter-ego52I really like this. And I'm not usually into reading things like this. But this is really good, and I love all your choices of words.
12/24/2005 c1 19Pink Sparrow
This is really nice. I like the way its written and I like the style of rhyming too. yay! Its really good- I don't like liars either.
19Pink SparrowThis is really nice. I like the way its written and I like the style of rhyming too. yay! Its really good- I don't like liars either.
12/18/2005 c1 13Shadowhound
in defense of the liars, it is sometimes better to live in a world of make-believe than in the one we live in. would you rather live in middle-eath or on earth? in truth, all fiction is a series of lies. so yes, lies catch up with us, but it depends on how we use those lies in our lives. i am a pathological liar. read my stories.
13Shadowhoundin defense of the liars, it is sometimes better to live in a world of make-believe than in the one we live in. would you rather live in middle-eath or on earth? in truth, all fiction is a series of lies. so yes, lies catch up with us, but it depends on how we use those lies in our lives. i am a pathological liar. read my stories.
12/18/2005 c1 fopldr
Wow, great poem, really brings out your feelings and was definatly not strained at all. Well writen all around! Keep up the good work!
~!Nick!~
Wow, great poem, really brings out your feelings and was definatly not strained at all. Well writen all around! Keep up the good work!
~!Nick!~
12/17/2005 c1 1Changethesubject
nice, i didn't think it was childish at all. it was so very true. but sometimes lies can lead to an escape as well...if no one finds out. i liked the way you steered away from clicheness (is that a word?). some lies poems are very similar and cliche, but this was good.
1Changethesubjectnice, i didn't think it was childish at all. it was so very true. but sometimes lies can lead to an escape as well...if no one finds out. i liked the way you steered away from clicheness (is that a word?). some lies poems are very similar and cliche, but this was good.
12/15/2005 c1 157darkmistresslae
o. i liked it. the ryming (and partial rhyming) was really good. nothing seemed forced, which is always good in poetry. i love the 3rd stanza because it forshadows the next stanza with "as you grow pale and cold" (talking about dying). its also some pretty good imagery. nice!
157darkmistresslaeo. i liked it. the ryming (and partial rhyming) was really good. nothing seemed forced, which is always good in poetry. i love the 3rd stanza because it forshadows the next stanza with "as you grow pale and cold" (talking about dying). its also some pretty good imagery. nice!
12/14/2005 c1 858Anna178
I personally like the rhythm and idea in this poem. It does sound somewhat childish but if so it only adds depth.
ANNA
858Anna178I personally like the rhythm and idea in this poem. It does sound somewhat childish but if so it only adds depth.
ANNA
12/14/2005 c1 3DarkWonders
congrats maggie i really like this one and its not dark keep it but i hatye liars to! cheers..
3DarkWonderscongrats maggie i really like this one and its not dark keep it but i hatye liars to! cheers..
12/13/2005 c1 33Crimson Flowers
Nice poem you've got here bout liars...haha...but one thing, I thought, maybe you should have made the rhymes more catchy somehow...well, I guess you are a fellow LOTR's fan too. Lol, keep writing...~Yours truly, C.F~
33Crimson FlowersNice poem you've got here bout liars...haha...but one thing, I thought, maybe you should have made the rhymes more catchy somehow...well, I guess you are a fellow LOTR's fan too. Lol, keep writing...~Yours truly, C.F~
12/12/2005 c1 20Pheobe Meryll
yes, spite brewing is a good word. The rhyme and meter was a little inconsistant. but it's still good. by all means upload the happy poems. I'll read them!
20Pheobe Meryllyes, spite brewing is a good word. The rhyme and meter was a little inconsistant. but it's still good. by all means upload the happy poems. I'll read them!
12/12/2005 c1 CrazyTwist
You could be talking to someone I know. She's a pathalogical liar - I am not kidding. The last line is always the most important in a poem - this time it's perfect. Ambiguous, yes - but that's all to the good.
You could be talking to someone I know. She's a pathalogical liar - I am not kidding. The last line is always the most important in a poem - this time it's perfect. Ambiguous, yes - but that's all to the good.
12/11/2005 c1 64Kassia Scarlett
Oh nonsense! It's not ridicules it's very nice! Well, I mean evil and angry, but nice like, literary nice. Anyway I like it! It's very cool and very expressive.
64Kassia ScarlettOh nonsense! It's not ridicules it's very nice! Well, I mean evil and angry, but nice like, literary nice. Anyway I like it! It's very cool and very expressive.