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2/13/2001 c1 41Willum
That was slightly...twisted...naw...different. Yeah, different. A nice change at the end, there. Fairly well written, though a few phrases were used over and over.
2/11/2001 c1 William Riley
I enjoyed this story. I especially like the fact that the story just assumes that Luke can actually bring Jackie back from the dead. Once that is established, the reader is free to concentrate on what the story is really about - Luke's inner turmoil. The best SciFi stories are those that take us far enough away, that we can take an honest look at ourselves. My only critism would be about the brother Alex. I don't think it adds anything to the story to know that Alex thinks it's a bad idea also. I actually seems to take us away from Luke having to fight this inner battle alone. It's a story about Luke and silent Jackie - stick with those two.

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