3/4/2006 c25 Kythia
okay, I lied. I am reviewing after number 6, and not number four...I just got so caught up in the series, I couldn't take time for a review!

This story series reminds me of a older version of the Nancy Drew books I read when I was little. I always read the first editions (blue backed) and not the new, abridged versions. I went through this point in my life where I read all of the nancy drew books, and any other mystery series (Hardy boys, etc)

I cannot wait until number seven is out!

~Kythia

2/18/2006 c25 murderprotocol
Thank God Michael is alright. And OMG, Manda proposed! That was a complete shock. You can't imagine the smile that crossed my face... Michael's dad seriously needs a reality check though. And I love his mother. :)

Take your time with MR7. You've still a reader in me. And for some reason, I'm beginning to think maybe it'll have something to do with Manda's missing uncle?

Until next time, another great MR story. And thank you for the shoutout and for reviewing my stuff in return.

2/17/2006 c24 murderprotocol
Oh my, you just had to leave it there, didn't you! I'm going to be waiting anxiously for a new update now...

Why do I get the feeling the move Michael made to open the chess board was the Sicillian Dragon?

Yay to Manda for figuring out Rodhart's true identity. And now I kind of feel bad for Dennis Charon. He seemed like a nice guy despite everything.

Some great action scenes. You've a great talent for writing them.

Looking forward to the next chap, and a new story when this is finished...

2/12/2006 c22 murderprotocol
Wow! I can't believe how everything is connected and unfolding. I just knew Diane had a connection, even if not directly - yet anyway.

And poor Michael! I'm glad Manda was able to work out where the diamonds are, but I only hope she'll be able to locate them in time to save him. I swear, I'm completely in love with him... :)

Eagerly awaiting more.

2/4/2006 c20 murderprotocol
So the plot thickens... I was beginning to get suss about Lyndi. So many possible suspects! I'm curious to know the relationship between Ellis and Buddy - it's fast becoming a huge conspiracy! And Manda's father's case is looking like it has some connection... I absolutely love how intricate your plot is!

I just want to point out one thing though. When you were talking about Lisa Preston, I noticed you referred to her as Lisa Prescott.

Apart from that, great update as always. I got excited to see you'd updated! And Alex, her character is such a nice addition. She frustrates Manda and embarrasses Michael - it's cute!

Post soon!

1/29/2006 c17 murderprotocol
Have I told you recently just how much I anticipate a new post from you? I hadn't read the other Manda stories properly, so I went back and read them all right down to the last word and I'm addictted - honestly. I always get excited to see you've updated.

I'm so glad Michael didn't let Manda push him away. It's about time he just gave her a damn good kiss and married her - we all can see she loves the guy! I love the house! And I can't believe she can't see it's for him and her! Not to mention, I'm terribly curious to know what Manda and Jenny Mackenzie spoke about...

Mr Charon - hm. I'm inclined to believe he was made to say he did it, and someone killed him knowing he was likely to admit who really did it. It's puzzling though, I can't say who I suspect. Diane as always but - well, lets just say you certainly know how to hide the perpetrator!

And Alex being a girl, ha, I never saw that one coming! I'm sure it'll make for some fun tension - or drive Manda to admitting her feelings!

Update soon my lovely! :D

1/22/2006 c15 murderprotocol
I suddenly have a deep respect for chess players. I've only ever played once, because I really suck and wow, I didn't know how competitive or complicated it was! I congratulate you on being able to play, or for at least doing to research to write it all so well!

But Manda, I really want to give that girl a smack over the head. She has a completely hot guy right in front of her who loves her to death - which we all can tell she recriprocates - and she still manages to find a reason to push him away. Maybe not everything about Manda has been explained... We all know she's angry at her father for controlling her, but maybe it's more than that - maybe it's about Logan. Or Pearl. Or deeper than just blaming herself for her mothers death. Hm...

The plot thickens. I still remain certain Diane has something to do with it, and Lyndi and Buddy are simply scapegoats. But I guess I'll have to wait and see. Interested to see what Mr Charon has to say, that's if someone doesn't get to him first.

Post soon. :)