for Lord Silver11/8/2006 c11 
24Sari Eufemia
Oh, this is a wonderful story! and from one so young! i take my hat off before you, i like it! but why is silver so mad at times? is he mad at himself? i like shannara! and i love clay!
up-date-soon! up-date-soon!
24Sari EufemiaOh, this is a wonderful story! and from one so young! i take my hat off before you, i like it! but why is silver so mad at times? is he mad at himself? i like shannara! and i love clay!
up-date-soon! up-date-soon!
11/3/2006 c10 Maryssa Rietschlin
To continue my last review-
Narcross gets mad at Shanarra, and Glay (being the chivalrous knight-in-training that he is) tries to defend her, except Shannara proves that she is more than capable of taking care of herself, which makes Glay feel useless, so Shannar tries to cheer him up by challenging him to a duel, which he refuses because "no knight or knight's apprentice with even a trace of honour would consider taking arms against a lady" or something of the sort, to which Shannara responds with "who are you calling a lady?" and proceeds to whup Glay's sorry arse while Silver and Eleanor just watch in shock and/or eat popcorn, whichever tickles your fancy.
To continue my last review-
Narcross gets mad at Shanarra, and Glay (being the chivalrous knight-in-training that he is) tries to defend her, except Shannara proves that she is more than capable of taking care of herself, which makes Glay feel useless, so Shannar tries to cheer him up by challenging him to a duel, which he refuses because "no knight or knight's apprentice with even a trace of honour would consider taking arms against a lady" or something of the sort, to which Shannara responds with "who are you calling a lady?" and proceeds to whup Glay's sorry arse while Silver and Eleanor just watch in shock and/or eat popcorn, whichever tickles your fancy.
11/2/2006 c11 Maryssa Rietschlin
Hi, Siobhan!
Wow, your name is hard to spell. I keep wanting to write 'Chvonne,' but I didn't want you to get upset the way I do when somebody spells my name 'Marissa.'
Anyway, I said I would review, and I'm finally doing it. So here it goes:
I think the phoenix (like every other guy on the planet) should mistake Nor for a girl, and flirt with him, and then Nor should get pissed off and beat the crap out of the winged wonder, and Narcross should help by distracting Shannara to keep her from coming to the flaming chicken's rescue, and then Shannara should realize what Narcross is trying to do and beat up her brother and save the birdbrain and make Narcross sleep on the couch.
Come on! Lord of the Underworld exiled from the bedroom for being mean to an epitome of light? HOW CAN YOU RESIST?
Hi, Siobhan!
Wow, your name is hard to spell. I keep wanting to write 'Chvonne,' but I didn't want you to get upset the way I do when somebody spells my name 'Marissa.'
Anyway, I said I would review, and I'm finally doing it. So here it goes:
I think the phoenix (like every other guy on the planet) should mistake Nor for a girl, and flirt with him, and then Nor should get pissed off and beat the crap out of the winged wonder, and Narcross should help by distracting Shannara to keep her from coming to the flaming chicken's rescue, and then Shannara should realize what Narcross is trying to do and beat up her brother and save the birdbrain and make Narcross sleep on the couch.
Come on! Lord of the Underworld exiled from the bedroom for being mean to an epitome of light? HOW CAN YOU RESIST?
11/1/2006 c11 DJ
Alex: *looks at rating* dammit woman! what have i told you about the dirty "p" word?
Cadi: O, there are so many ways that can be taken.
i know...i know...we only read PG-13 if there is nothign else better but this is a good story! i mean it has a virgin and a dragon...
Muses: *stare* *crickets chirp*
Alex: virgin?
you would snatch that out of the whole thing wouldn`t you?
Alex: well the dragon needs to remedy that. come on lord silver, just spread them and...
PG-13!
Alex: what, all PG-13 movies have the "F" word in it.
this isn`t a movie and they didn`t have that word back then! sorry...did i give you bad ideas?
Alex: *looks at rating* dammit woman! what have i told you about the dirty "p" word?
Cadi: O, there are so many ways that can be taken.
i know...i know...we only read PG-13 if there is nothign else better but this is a good story! i mean it has a virgin and a dragon...
Muses: *stare* *crickets chirp*
Alex: virgin?
you would snatch that out of the whole thing wouldn`t you?
Alex: well the dragon needs to remedy that. come on lord silver, just spread them and...
PG-13!
Alex: what, all PG-13 movies have the "F" word in it.
this isn`t a movie and they didn`t have that word back then! sorry...did i give you bad ideas?
11/1/2006 c11 Natsuhiko
Shannara and Narcross are so hilarious even in the most serious situations, lol.
Shannara and Narcross are so hilarious even in the most serious situations, lol.
10/29/2006 c11 Melly
update update update please! i love it ^.^ your a great writer
update update update please! i love it ^.^ your a great writer
10/25/2006 c11 estrela jem
Woohoo! Another chapter ... no wait ... TWO new chapters! That is awsome! So what's going to happen now? hehe can't wait to find out so update soon!
Woohoo! Another chapter ... no wait ... TWO new chapters! That is awsome! So what's going to happen now? hehe can't wait to find out so update soon!
10/25/2006 c11 RandomPerson13
whoops. i dunno what happened to my last review, oh well, i love this story! it just keeps geting better and better.
whoops. i dunno what happened to my last review, oh well, i love this story! it just keeps geting better and better.
10/25/2006 c11 Nightshades-Jade
This chapter is so awesome! and it has so many hints. Teh moment with Lord Silver and Eleanor is soo cute! Thank you for posting this amazing story!
This chapter is so awesome! and it has so many hints. Teh moment with Lord Silver and Eleanor is soo cute! Thank you for posting this amazing story!
10/25/2006 c11 7Yonder
Another great chapter! I really like Shannara, she's so funny! She makes me laugh all the time! Where in the world did you come up with the idea for her?
Oh, a phoenix? I've always been fond of phoenixes, they're so pretty. ^^
-Awaiting your next update with much anticipation!
7YonderAnother great chapter! I really like Shannara, she's so funny! She makes me laugh all the time! Where in the world did you come up with the idea for her?
Oh, a phoenix? I've always been fond of phoenixes, they're so pretty. ^^
-Awaiting your next update with much anticipation!
10/24/2006 c11 2Daidairo
Nice work! I'll be watching you!
P.S. This story reminds me of another that I reccently read. Search for "Dragon's Bait" written by Vivian Vande Velde; I think you'll like it!
2DaidairoNice work! I'll be watching you!
P.S. This story reminds me of another that I reccently read. Search for "Dragon's Bait" written by Vivian Vande Velde; I think you'll like it!
10/24/2006 c10 RandomPerson13
yay! i
yay! i
10/23/2006 c10 Raine
I thought you had abandoned this story, but I guess not. I was the beta that volunteered. Sorry, I just noticed this story was going again. You take FOREVER to update chapters and I thought I would help you out if you was in desperate need and had to have a beta.
tootles!
I thought you had abandoned this story, but I guess not. I was the beta that volunteered. Sorry, I just noticed this story was going again. You take FOREVER to update chapters and I thought I would help you out if you was in desperate need and had to have a beta.
tootles!
10/23/2006 c10 volleychick89
ack! I'm hooked again! What is she going to do? The only way for me to find out is for you to post that new chapter! great! keep it up!
ack! I'm hooked again! What is she going to do? The only way for me to find out is for you to post that new chapter! great! keep it up!