for The Shadow Within The Innocent Heart7/17/2006 c1 MonkeyMohawk1
alright that was freakin cool!...uh no im not a sick person...much...but the details really signified what was going on and how she felt perfectly...and so i say UPDATE!...cant wait to hear about your next chapter...alright then CYA!
alright that was freakin cool!...uh no im not a sick person...much...but the details really signified what was going on and how she felt perfectly...and so i say UPDATE!...cant wait to hear about your next chapter...alright then CYA!
6/10/2006 c1 
7Rachel L
I hope you continue with this! I see it's been a while since you put this up here. I think you write very well...and I think this story is interesting so far.
7Rachel LI hope you continue with this! I see it's been a while since you put this up here. I think you write very well...and I think this story is interesting so far.
4/29/2006 c1 ForeverYours15
That was great. I can't wait to know what happens next. I hope you update soon.
That was great. I can't wait to know what happens next. I hope you update soon.
3/14/2006 c1 84DemonicDestiny
GREAT beginning. Grusome, dark, and perfect. The way she's thinking seems so real, it's like you've been through this yourelf but I'm sure you haven't.Really looking fowards to the next chapter so update fast!
84DemonicDestinyGREAT beginning. Grusome, dark, and perfect. The way she's thinking seems so real, it's like you've been through this yourelf but I'm sure you haven't.Really looking fowards to the next chapter so update fast!
1/31/2006 c1 2Brantails
Wow. The beginning is like, Wow. Thats all I can say. Please continue, it seems promising.
2BrantailsWow. The beginning is like, Wow. Thats all I can say. Please continue, it seems promising.
1/14/2006 c1 5unrequitedx
WOW Awesomely gruesome! I really look forward to the next chapter and update soon! I really want to know what's going to happen next, =DD
5unrequitedxWOW Awesomely gruesome! I really look forward to the next chapter and update soon! I really want to know what's going to happen next, =DD
12/13/2005 c1 1innocent lil devil
good start. it was kinda dark but thats really what made it interesting. it sounds like her past s going to be an intersting one, i really cant wait to see what it is. can't wait to read the next chapter. ~mandi~
1innocent lil devilgood start. it was kinda dark but thats really what made it interesting. it sounds like her past s going to be an intersting one, i really cant wait to see what it is. can't wait to read the next chapter. ~mandi~