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3/9/2006 c1 197the Stranger in the moonlight
This was really good, it had a constant flow and I liked the message, I especially liked these lines

"Out her shell she is calm and steady.

Inside, her memoies are becoming heavy.

To watch her, so little meets their eyes.

They do not know she hides and cries.

Her dark side is lost and alone.

Her past is always here to roam."

Really saying how lost and alone she is.

Sincerely,

the Stranger in the moonlight.
1/17/2006 c1 1kisslikemurder
I'd like to say thanks for the review on my poem Like A Bottle Of Glass Sand.

I'd also like to say you did a great job in this poem, keep up the great work!
1/12/2006 c1 Herminia
Wow. This is wonderful and terrific. Very emotional. Good job.
1/4/2006 c1 5mapes4213
for your first poem this is reall good i love the last two lines "and yet herself she is trying to seek" that line says alot right there keep writing i would like to see some more of your poems
12/22/2005 c1 2The Big Pimpin Pimple
Agh this describes me so well! but I think I know who you're actually describing (wink wink). but I still feel this way. this amazing this is the best poem you've ever written.

Keep coming up with more pleasethey're beautiful really they are
12/14/2005 c1 B34utifulDr34mer
of all your poems, i think this is your best. you really out-did yourself for this one. im so proud of you, my baby is all grown up *sniff sniff*. lol. keep it up and if you ever become a famous poet (which i think you will) remember that i helped you out with your titles.

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