for The Dreamer, with the Pale Blue Eyes9/30/2008 c1 
10dreameratbang
Wonderfully emotional and dark. Also beautifully written with lovely imagery, it was beautiful!
10dreameratbangWonderfully emotional and dark. Also beautifully written with lovely imagery, it was beautiful!
7/27/2006 c1 J.E.Wyatt
Wow, what an amazing poem. It flowed so beautifully . . .it's jsut amazing! Ican just picture everything as I read this poem. Bravo!
Wow, what an amazing poem. It flowed so beautifully . . .it's jsut amazing! Ican just picture everything as I read this poem. Bravo!
7/11/2006 c1 I like makin' poems but i suck
It's so beautiful...
It's so beautiful...
12/14/2005 c1 10Fancy
This is entirely too pretty to end so soon! I might just have been studying for finals too much, but this reminds me of... Edmumd Spenser's Faery Queen. Or maybe Keats's Eve of Saint Agnes. Or something. I don't know what it reminds me of, just that it reminds me of something that ought to be stanzas and stanzas long. =) Nonetheless, I am also quite fond of it as it is, which is to say: concise, well-rhymed, well-put-together, and haunting.
10FancyThis is entirely too pretty to end so soon! I might just have been studying for finals too much, but this reminds me of... Edmumd Spenser's Faery Queen. Or maybe Keats's Eve of Saint Agnes. Or something. I don't know what it reminds me of, just that it reminds me of something that ought to be stanzas and stanzas long. =) Nonetheless, I am also quite fond of it as it is, which is to say: concise, well-rhymed, well-put-together, and haunting.
12/14/2005 c1 Night
Whoo! Didn't have to log in!
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o.O; Enough of that...
This poem was so cool Kiki! I am left speachless... it's awsomeness has no description..
~Night~
Whoo! Didn't have to log in!
(^_^) (^_^)(^_^) (^_^)
o.O; Enough of that...
This poem was so cool Kiki! I am left speachless... it's awsomeness has no description..
~Night~
12/13/2005 c1 11les petits bateaux
A very sorrowful and touching piece. I like the way you delve into her woes and how she felt the pain. Very emotional, yet hard as concrete as well.
~~Trinity
11les petits bateauxA very sorrowful and touching piece. I like the way you delve into her woes and how she felt the pain. Very emotional, yet hard as concrete as well.
~~Trinity