for Waiting10/19/2006 c1 Nicole
*sigh* she (I assume its a she) sounds so forlorn :( there isnt all that descriptive emotive language that everyone loves to read, but the simplicity works well...it creates a /realistic/ picture of this fragile little girl who's simply too tired to make a big fuss about being disappointed, again.
*sigh* she (I assume its a she) sounds so forlorn :( there isnt all that descriptive emotive language that everyone loves to read, but the simplicity works well...it creates a /realistic/ picture of this fragile little girl who's simply too tired to make a big fuss about being disappointed, again.
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