for Lies Pretending to Believe12/17/2005 c1 I'm Not On This Site
That rhyme scheme boggles the mind!
I think that went too fast for me to really catch it. So I read it again, and it still zoomed by before I could get a close look. It's eerie. It sort of trips around itself, like a small but swift and noisy stream, small enough to hide beneath the brush so you wouldn't know it was there except for that distinct trickling sound.
Been reading too long. Must sleep.
That rhyme scheme boggles the mind!
I think that went too fast for me to really catch it. So I read it again, and it still zoomed by before I could get a close look. It's eerie. It sort of trips around itself, like a small but swift and noisy stream, small enough to hide beneath the brush so you wouldn't know it was there except for that distinct trickling sound.
Been reading too long. Must sleep.
12/14/2005 c1 
92randompoetry
Wow, I'm awed over here with the brilliant rhyming job you did. The poem is very good.
92randompoetryWow, I'm awed over here with the brilliant rhyming job you did. The poem is very good.