for The Eyes of the Lost6/17/2010 c2 Ann
Strange- the way the first chapter is much longer than the second. It's been a rather interesting story so far- I'm sorry you never finished posting it (I encourage you to finish it up, if you've got any ideas for it). It was good writing.
Strange- the way the first chapter is much longer than the second. It's been a rather interesting story so far- I'm sorry you never finished posting it (I encourage you to finish it up, if you've got any ideas for it). It was good writing.
1/14/2006 c2 
7Justin Carlton
I assume this isn't the end. Check out my horror fics man - only two, but I think they'd be worth your while.
Keep writing!
7Justin CarltonI assume this isn't the end. Check out my horror fics man - only two, but I think they'd be worth your while.
Keep writing!
12/16/2005 c1 26Sub Form of Human
That was interesting. However, the cliff hanger should be able to really leave the reader wanting more. The last few sentances in a horror story or chapter should have an immediate strong impact on the reader. I do like the idea behind this story. It's creative and original. I hope you finish this.
26Sub Form of HumanThat was interesting. However, the cliff hanger should be able to really leave the reader wanting more. The last few sentances in a horror story or chapter should have an immediate strong impact on the reader. I do like the idea behind this story. It's creative and original. I hope you finish this.