for Edge12/16/2005 c1 
9Kesslyn Rosewood
I like it...But I think you have a type, 'if you made leaped' doesn't make sense.
9Kesslyn RosewoodI like it...But I think you have a type, 'if you made leaped' doesn't make sense.
12/15/2005 c1 17Mister Lucifer
Woah, very short but it really gets you thinking. There is one part that just didn't quite flow right "If you made leaped" but other wise a very good poem. Kepp writing bud.
~Mister Lucifer
17Mister LuciferWoah, very short but it really gets you thinking. There is one part that just didn't quite flow right "If you made leaped" but other wise a very good poem. Kepp writing bud.
~Mister Lucifer